[freedom_fighter]

Hello again , I call this one believe. Tell me what you think. Heavy dostortion, choppy guitar . ( ) = scream

VS-1

Along this rusted road I walk
Let Your fire burn through
Hear these words that I pray? ( I feel dead another day )
Rusted charms are mine to hold
Father , breathe in to me ... ETERNITY!


Chorus -

O hear my prayers, take my thoughts , peirce me through,
O, do not let these words be unheard, I am pierced , I am broken , I am living for You.

VS-2
This day feels like the end
Alone , alone another day ,
I have followed this trend ( over agian )
Bleed through me ,
shall my eyes see ... ( eternity )

Bridge -
Forever Your fire will burn , through me, for You
You have taken it all, fought the bitter fall ,
and I will( I will ) and I will ( I will ) follow You ----2 x's

[DiosEsBuen]

Hey i like this one too! im not really into the screaming things but theres not much in it... it sounds good to me hope to see some more of ur writing!

[freedom_fighter]

Originally Posted by freedom_fighter

Hello again , I call this one believe. Tell me what you think. Heavy dostortion, choppy guitar . ( ) = scream

VS-1

Along this rusted road I walk
Let Your fire burn through
Hear these words that I pray? ( I feel dead another day )
Rusted charms are mine to hold
Father , breathe in to me ... ETERNITY!


Chorus -

O hear my prayers, take my thoughts , peirce me through,
O, do not let these words be unheard, I am pierced , I am broken , I am living for You.

VS-2
This day feels like the end
Alone , alone another day ,
I have followed this trend ( over agian )
Bleed through me ,
shall my eyes see ... ( eternity )

Bridge -
Forever Your fire will burn , through me, for You
You have taken it all, fought the bitter fall ,
and I will( I will ) and I will ( I will ) follow You ----2 x's

If you rockers like this or any of my songs , nominate them for January songwriting competition...peace!