[dream of angels]

This is a song that is part of a kind of story. This part is about a battle, kind of like the spiritual battle of good vs. evil depicted as a physical battle. Eventually, other songs will be completed to continue the story. If you like this one and if i remember, i'll post them as i write them.



Clouds of dust become swarms of locusts
Rivers of fire and blood
The flames lick at the sky
Searing images of demons in my mind
The crack of bone drowns out the screams
Of terror washing by in crimson streams
Someone put out the light
For a moment day is night
And the blood is only rain on our graves

And the blood is only rain on our graves, on our graves
And the blood is only rain on our graves

Night is never-ending
Drunk with blood we reign
My brothers stand beside me
And remind me I’m still sane

Flesh and iron meet under the nothing
In holes so deep you’d think they’d never end
Diluted rain attempts in vain to cover up the dead
And close the eyes of one who laid down his life for his friends

No one hath greater love than this, no one hath greater love
No one hath greater love than this
Oh Lord, receive my soul

[Demon_Hunter]

Originally Posted by dream of angels

Someone put out the light
For a moment day is night

Really kool song, this is the only part in the whole thing I didnt like.

1: It is disconected from the vs.
2: that last fraze has absolutely nothing (that i can see) to do with the song.


But dude, great lyrics, definately post the rest of those songs when you write them. I enjoyed reading this song, and if the others are to complete this ones story, im sure ill enjoy those to


Edit: Even tho this is only something minor, i wasnt to enthusiastic about the last part of the song. I dont know why, but it just doesnt sit well to me.

but still a kool song

[dream of angels]

yah, you're right, i dont like that line either. I'll change it, when i have some time...in the meantime i have the next song. I'll post it in a different thread though. Thanks for the reply

[Demon_Hunter]

Originally Posted by dream of angels

yah, you're right, i dont like that line either. I'll change it, when i have some time...in the meantime i have the next song. I'll post it in a different thread though. Thanks for the reply

koolness, im really lookin forward to reading it