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Old 10-15-2001, 11:04 PM   #1
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Lone wolf
ok guys, im back after a long while with anew poem. This is called Lone Wolf. Its really sad, but tell me what ya think, its about a person I talked with the other day.

I am a lone wolf
Wandering the empty dessert
The moon is high and the stars are bright
A cold wind blows in my face
I have romaed this desserted plain for 18 years
I hopes of finding that one onther wolf like me
A partner who understandes me and my needs
A lover with compassion
But that is not meant for me
I am to trek on these sore feet
Blistered from this painfull, endless walk
A faint shadow moves and I turn in hopes it is that she wolf
A she-wolf it is, but with cold eyes
She is like all the others
Cold, empty eyes and a fake grin
She passes by without another glance
I am alone again
If you look into the night sky, you will find me
Look off to the lonely star in the corner
Thats where I am
Walking alone, forgotten, gone...
Nothing Last forever

Oh and this is my new e-mail: FacelessServant@aol.com
Dont send comments to the other one, cause I deleted it. Thanx

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Old 10-16-2001, 03:34 PM   #2
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that really is a cool poem.
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As you tear and tear your hair from roots,
from that same head that you have twice removed
a lock of hair you said would prove
that our love would never die.
As I sing and sing of awful things,
the pleasure that my sadness brings
as my fingers press onto the strings
you get another clumsy chord.
-bright eyes
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