My Songs (RC)

fendstratplaya · 11-29-2004, 04:59 PM

I come up with songs and post them here in another thread titled " 'Stars' and 'The Rain' ", but they don't get much response at all. So i will just put them on this thread. I would love reviews on any of the songs.

Verse 1
How could I have gone along
Singing such a hollow song
Walking cross the dead ground
No life around
Your weren't to be found
Or had i pulled the shades
Over my own eyes

Chorus
This sides much brighter
Glowing with a morning dew
I finally saw the way here
And relized it was always near

Verse 2
Dark are the clouds
That float above the other side
Filled with sorrow
And swelled with pride
Rain falls in sheets
Leaving no where to hide
Thats when I found this side

Chorus (with a slight variation)
Here it's much brighter
Glowing with a morning dew
I finally saw the way here
And realized it was always near

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Thats it for now...The Simpsons are about to come on, and my other binder of lyrics is downstairs.

fendstratplaya · 12-02-2004, 04:08 PM

Verse 1
Free from falling down the trap again
The trap i set myself way back when
I never thought it'd snag me in

Nothing I could have done to break free
No power could i swell that large within me

Chorus
I'll sing and dance
Sing and dance
Now that I'm away from me

I'll sing and dance
Sing and dance
Now that I can see

Verse
How many times
Did my footing get away from me
Was it because i couldn't see, that
You were right in front of me
Just took some refocusing
But now...(go into chorus)

fendstratplaya · 12-03-2004, 10:16 PM

Verse 1
Stop to wonder
How did I come to this place
The path had been so clear
I knew my space
Am I still there now?
Just with clouds round my face?

Chorus
The emptiness has been filled
This is surley not where it ends
It is the begining
The begining with no end

Verse 2
I want to be where
The mountains meet the cool air
Me with you and no cares
Just sit and stare
The world in it's place

fendstratplaya · 12-04-2004, 10:51 AM

Verse 1
I call to you
Come quickly to me
Hear my voice as I say
I'm stuck in this day
And you holding the keys to tomorrow

I'll sing
To put away this screen
It's dulling light
And keeping me closed in tight
When i'm trying to take flight

Chorus
Away
From today i'll be
Above this all i will see

Verse 2
I'll call for you
Quickly come to me
Break these walls
Till a rubble is all that remains
Give me a new name

fendstratplaya · 12-07-2004, 08:14 PM

Verse 1
So long ago
With no lights
No snow
They gathered round to see the universes' best
Who'da thought he could live in such a mess
But here he was
With no turkey dinner
And no tree
Yet there was a star
Hovering above the scene

Chorus 1
Light, so bright for this world
Came with joy
And our friend grace

Verse 2
Older he grew
Still making his way through
Hate, greed, power all strewn
About the bulding he would so soon
So soon break

Chorus 2
Light, so bright for this world
Came to ignite the flame
Burn away the walls
All for a worthy cause

Verse 3
Blameless he came
Blameless he went
Down to a grave
Along with criminals that filled men with grief

Chorus 3
Light, so bright for this world
Came and went blamelessly
Came and went blamelessly
Just so we could finally see

Verse 4
No hole could they dig
No rock could they set
This man they could not hold to death
Away the boulder rolled
Cast away by rays of gold

Chorus 4
Light, so bright for this world
It's been payed for
Divisions you tore
Much more than a Sunday morning bore

My Christmas song. I just decided to write it, and haven't looked over it or anything. May not be to perfect, and ideas may not flow too well...who knows.

fendstratplaya · 12-08-2004, 04:18 PM

Deeper

Verse 1
Run and run
Round in circles i go
Am i going to fast
Or am i going to slow

If i were to ask
And you told me
Then i would know

But you already met me here
Everything is coming clear

Chorus
Could this be any better
Could i go any deeper
Now if it will just last through this moment
I'll be where i want to be

Verse 2
What to do
Now that i'm with you
Theres so much i see right through

Stay with me
While the dark blows by
Light your candle the guide us to the other side

Here we sit
In the cool shade of this tree
Just you and me

fendstratplaya · 12-08-2004, 04:22 PM

Verse 1
Everyday
A new way to live
A new way to say
That i give

Everyday
Start all over again
Think it will be ok
To once more begin

Chorus
It's all for you
Could it be any other way and still be real
All for you

Verse 2
Everyday
Seems so different
But in the same way
They're so consistent

Everyday
It's a slightly different track
Just move where it lays
It could go either way

fendstratplaya · 12-20-2004, 03:30 PM

Verse 1
Around in circles I run
Lap after lap, but now i'm done
How long did I go
Trying to make it a one man show
But now it's over
Now i'm much closer

Chorus
Once more I'm here
What was cluttered has been cleared
Well, once more i'm hear
Theres nothing left to fear

Verse 2
Broke the chain
Of imperfection come again
And so many things blocked my way
I'm luck to say that...(go into chorus)

fendstratplaya · 01-06-2005, 09:46 PM

Verse 1
So rising so quickly
All without ever knowing
Exactly what is you seek

Further your knowledge
Help this process of growing
Keep it all away
Why give it the time of day

Chorus
I'll keep falling for now
Even without an outward sound
That lets you know
I'm already gone

Verse 2
Why still run
Toward an impossible goal
The world is screaming yes
But still you think no

Oh how fast, it really goes
Why does it seem to move so slow

The prouder and taller your sit on your wall
In the end, the harder and further you'll fall

Chorus

fendstratplaya · 01-15-2005, 11:02 PM

Verse 1
The wires, they cross
The wires, they trip
Who's our boss
What defines a slip

And we sing songs
And try to learn
But what is any of it worth
What can we drag down in the earth

Chorus
This floating rock
Is falling so fast
6 billion in the crowd
And no one even gasps

Verse 2
These wars
This gore.....
What are we supposedly living for

Is it knowledge
Is there something to gain
To you is it just a game......

Chorus

Verse 3
And here we live
But for such a short time
A matter of days
Where so much can hide...

Light is dulled
And people confused
Perhaps they'll stumble through the dark
Back to you....

fendstratplaya · 01-15-2005, 11:08 PM

Verse
The walls we set between
The holes we dig ourself
The bullets so sparkly clean
While love lies on the back shelf

Chorus
It can't shine through
It's drowning in the dark
The sun goes down
And then theres you

Verse
And how long can we sing
With happy faces and glee
When the dark is so suffocating.

To sleep through it all would be so grand
If not, i'll take your hand
It's all too much for me to understand.

fendstratplaya · 02-03-2005, 06:55 PM

Verse 1
Lows and highs
Come in and out
Like the tide

And still you stay
A bird locked in a cage
But the door is open....

Chorus
Sitting around inside
While running full speed
On the outside

And why can't we
Walk on
Walk on free

Verse 2
And the wayt
we're finding out
is not just what it seems

Outside we look so great
Inside it's just a disgrace
As we think it's all about me....

fendstratplaya · 02-07-2005, 08:24 PM

Verse1
Natalie
What a name
I wish it was mine...
I'm sure everything would work out fine....

Natalie
What a name
To be represented by
In this crazy game.....

Chorus
If it wasn't yours
It'd be all mine
Something i'd definatly not try to hide

Verse 2
Natalie
Just don't fall
From the high spot on the wall
It's quite a long way back to earth

Natalie
Don't you know what to say
Maybe it's just today...
Not coming up your way

Mattlock · 02-07-2005, 08:34 PM

Quote:

Verse1
Natalie
What a name
I wish it was mine...
I'm sure everything would work out fine....

Natalie
What a name
To be represented by
In this crazy game.....

Chorus
If it wasn't yours
It'd be all mine
Something i'd definatly not try to hide

Verse 2
Natalie
Just don't fall
From the high spot on the wall
It's quite a long way back to earth

Natalie
Don't you know what to say
Maybe it's just today...
Not coming up your way

I like this. It's simple, in a good way. Like Coldplay. Good job!

.natalie. · 02-07-2005, 09:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mattlock

I like this. It's simple, in a good way. Like Coldplay. Good job!

im with you on that mattlock.. its quite an impressive song... the kid must have had some great inspiration for that one.. oh to meet that 'natalie'.. must be a really cool girl.. ..