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10-11-2001, 12:58 PM
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| eyes that burn so bright  Joined: May 2001 Location: where the leaves fall Posts: 336
  | Bright side This poem might seem depressing at first, but its about not fitting in. I sometimes feel this way...like I dont belong anywhere w/ anyone. i wrote it a couple nights ago. Bright side I dont belong to your web of fortune I dont want to blend into your puddle mud-ravaged, your in between filth a line between parking lot and mansion subtle i stand in the outside, alone on the inside dont bother me i wont look on the brightside. I close my arms and wish to die before you the immaturity of your run-away carasouls so evasive you are describing what you are reveling in present time, its storming squalls i stand on the outside alone on the inside shallow puddle blinded by the bright side I light a candle, i stare at it hard maybe fire will swallow my cursed being console me, you would never break me im out on a limb but don't save me you'd just enslave me i stand on the outside alone on the inside in biting chains i wont look at the bright side i feel like the dark side
__________________ <br> <font size="1"> As you tear and tear your hair from roots, from that same head that you have twice removed a lock of hair you said would prove that our love would never die. As I sing and sing of awful things, the pleasure that my sadness brings as my fingers press onto the strings you get another clumsy chord. -bright eyes <br> <a href="http://stepinside.crimsonblog.com" target="_blank">In your world my feet are out of step</a></font> <br> |
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10-14-2001, 01:15 PM
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| Registered User Joined: Oct 2001 Location: Colorado Springs Posts: 18
| Very good, but how sad!  I know how you feel though. But hey, speak life into your situation. Friends are a gift from God and something you should have! Romans 4:17 Call things that be not as though they were!
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10-14-2001, 08:58 PM
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| Kiss me, I'm Irish  Joined: May 2001 Location: Somewhere in the world Posts: 254
| Yeah, I kind of know how you feel.... But I love you!!
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10-15-2001, 05:28 PM
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| eyes that burn so bright Joined: May 2001 Location: where the leaves fall Posts: 336
| thanks guys. I'll try to "look on the bright side" i was just sorta sad when i wrote it.
__________________ <br> <font size="1"> As you tear and tear your hair from roots, from that same head that you have twice removed a lock of hair you said would prove that our love would never die. As I sing and sing of awful things, the pleasure that my sadness brings as my fingers press onto the strings you get another clumsy chord. -bright eyes <br> <a href="http://stepinside.crimsonblog.com" target="_blank">In your world my feet are out of step</a></font> <br> |
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