[Charismaniac]

If anyone thinks to read this, though I'm not really expecting anyone to, please tell me wot you think, 'cos it's the first of a series of songs that I'm trying to write in order to change the image my songs.

so here it is.


"3115"

In the hills there is crying
Rachel mourns for her children
She refuses to be comforted
'Cos they're all dead, everyone

But The Lord says

Dry your eyes,
They'll come back
From the enemy's land
Then all you've done for them
Will be rewarded

(repeat)

(start again)

So don't lose hope (to end)

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The chord sequence is kinda odd, and it's really meant for two guitars, but this is basically how it goes.

(1st guitar)
(Capo on 5th fret)

E-10--8--6--------10--8--10---8--6------6-----------
A-12-10--8~12--12-10--12--10---8-------8-----8-
D------------------------------------------6-------6-----

(2nd guitar)
(Capo on 5th fret)

B---7-7-7-7--8-8-8-8
e---7-7-7-7--7-7-7-7

Both guitars hold this pattern for the entirety of the song.

peace love and happiness

[Ali4God]

I like it! Its hard to hear in my head, though! But thats not your fault... I'm just not good at it! Yeah, I would totally like to see what else you come up with in the 'series'! Post them!
*Alison*

[zoe r]

Ya I think it's swell.keep posting your stuff! --Zoe

[Charismaniac]

Thanx a lot guys, that means a heck of a lot to me as I never think my stuff is good enough, even when everyone tells me it is, sorta like Michaelangelo, his own worst critic, but anyway, I'll keep posting, maybe even some of my older stuff, I'll have to revamp it though.


B Cyin Ya'll
JaImes