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10-07-2001, 12:46 AM
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| Registered User Joined: Sep 2001 Location: Washington Posts: 24
 | insecurities I tried to make this explain a cutter's deepest fears as well as I could. I don't know how well I did but I tried... A Cutters’ Cry What if I told you something you didn’t want to hear? Would you listen to me anyway? Would you love me in spite of it? What if I showed you something you didn’t want to see? Would you look at it anyway? Would you love me in spite of it? What if I told you everything I’ve never voiced? Would you not discount it? Would you love me because of it? What if I showed you all the scars I’ve hidden? Would you accept them as hurt and not sickness? Would you love me because of it? What if I broke down and bared all? Would you stay here and hold me? Would you love me?
__________________ You've got to dance like nobody's looking and love like it's never going to hurt. ~ Ann Wells |
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10-09-2001, 02:19 PM
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| Registered User  Joined: Sep 2001 Location: Ohio (home), Indiana (school) Posts: 57
 |  Wow... wow... that's about all I can say. I was never a cutter or anything, but I can relate to that even... we all have scars that we try to hide, on the inside and/or the outside, and we're all afraid of what will happen if we share them with others. Wow kid, you did a heck of a job putting your feelings into words, putting the pain, the doubt, the fear into words. Nothin' but love and respect for ya. Keep lovin' the Lord, He never didn't love you. |
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10-10-2001, 06:35 PM
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| new horizons...  Joined: Feb 2001 Location: Chicago Posts: 1,252
| Bethany, I think you did way more than you set out to do. Like A-rok said, we all have things we hide, and wonder if others will love us in spite of it. Though they may not be visible, they're there. There is someone out there who loves us no matter what. I do mean Jesus, but there are others who also will love us. Perhaps our closest friend, or maybe our future husbands or wives. You are so awesome. Keep writing, k? Peace ya'll, Beth 
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10-10-2001, 10:04 PM
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| Down with the cuteness  Joined: Sep 2001 Location: Orange County, CA Posts: 1,348
 | Man 'o man! You are so good at putting words down! Like the two above said, it goes so much deeper than external scars... you have an amazing gift... keep using this gift God has given you, girl! Lotsa Luv! *Alison*
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10-11-2001, 12:45 PM
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| eyes that burn so bright  Joined: May 2001 Location: where the leaves fall Posts: 336
| that is so true. I love youre writing!!!!
__________________ <br> <font size="1"> As you tear and tear your hair from roots, from that same head that you have twice removed a lock of hair you said would prove that our love would never die. As I sing and sing of awful things, the pleasure that my sadness brings as my fingers press onto the strings you get another clumsy chord. -bright eyes <br> <a href="http://stepinside.crimsonblog.com" target="_blank">In your world my feet are out of step</a></font> <br> |
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10-14-2001, 09:03 PM
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| Kiss me, I'm Irish  Joined: May 2001 Location: Somewhere in the world Posts: 254
| Good, good. PassionPoet you really have a gift!
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