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Old 10-04-2001, 03:42 PM   #1
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A song...Reflection

A few days ago, my lit teacher told us all to go look at the stars for our homework(we're studying transcendentalism) and really think about what we saw. I got bored with the stars and my attention drifted to the full moon. After staring it and thinking, this is what I wrote:

Staring at the sky on a starry night
The moon is big and full and bright
But the moon doesn't shine with its own force
It gets its light from another source
The sun, it brings this light I see
It shines on the moon and onto me


I want to be the moon-In the glow of the Son
Then reflect his light on everyone


They're staring at me and wondering why
My life is big and full and bright
But I don't shine with my own force
I get my light from another source
My Jesus is this light they see
It shines on them cause it shines in me


I am the moon-In the glow of the Son,
Reflecting his light on everyone


A light so bright it can't be hid
A love so amazing it's popping the lid
A joy so abundant it must be shared
A life with hope, nothing else can compare


Be the moon-In the glow of the Son
Then reflect his light on everyone
Be the moon-In the glow of the Son
Then reflect his light on everyone

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Old 10-12-2001, 05:21 PM   #2
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hey! you're from a|e aren't you! lol

hi!

LOL


ok, yeah, i'm done.

by the way, nice poem/song.
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Old 10-13-2001, 09:29 AM   #3
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Yeah, actually, I am from a|e.

Woohoo!
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Old 10-14-2001, 01:23 PM   #4
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I really liked that one. The chorus is a great line!

Is that true? That the moon shines from the sun... I guess I had never thought of it that way before!

Anyway, great job!
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Old 10-14-2001, 09:04 PM   #5
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Cewl! I loved it!
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