[.torrin.]

don't have a title yet, and it's still really rough but i'd like to get some input



A part of me wants to crash over this embankment
But synthetic straps hold me down
When I get this way i need to sway the temptation to swerve
I'm pseudo-suicidal and i'm ridin' my last edge

Can you be my something to believe in
I'm a prophet without a voice
Like a cross-less martyr I'm digging for a purpose

Can you be my air when i'm drowning
I'm a martyr without a cause
Like a faceless messiah i'm searching for belonging

like i said, still rough, any input is appreciated, and no this is not a christian song

[fudrudler]

That is a very dark song. It's looks cool to me. Hearing it sung would give me a better idea though. I'm kinda sound orientated.

[Meggie moo moo]

Lyrics are everything.....That is so awesome.....everytime i try write a song, it proposes some kind of concealed horrific notions and i don't know where i go wrong-- but THAT--is good.