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04-07-2004, 11:01 AM
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| Is Back!  Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,776
  | As the world spins around me... I'll just start off with one of my first poems I suppose... Life is a journey, While all the world's a stage, To take the wrong turn, To feel the Master's rage. I give my soul to a feeling Repentance my only fear I somehow know you're recieving. I somehow know you're near... Just as a side note to readers... These poems, although depressing at times...are my ways to vent. In no way d they always mean what they say...
__________________ <marquee> I rise up like the pheonix from the ashes of an older way with wisdom gained, I turn away </marquee> Last edited by Brandon; 04-26-2004 at 10:43 AM. |
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04-07-2004, 11:13 AM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,776
| Struggling in a world of sorrow, Reaching for a light I cannot see Searching for a new Tomorrow Searching for a new eternity... Like Samuel who heard the Calling, Each of us has felt the longing Of a life as someone free. Carry me. Me. Hanging on the cross, Bleeding for the lost Iron nails in His hands See the blood he shed Thorns upon his head See the bloo he shed for you and me... Obviously, this isn't all of it. I'll update as i get more...
__________________ <marquee> I rise up like the pheonix from the ashes of an older way with wisdom gained, I turn away </marquee> |
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04-08-2004, 02:30 PM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,776
| Ok. Update. The things in BOLD are the things I have added... Struggling in a world of sorrow, Reaching for a light I cannot see Searching for a new Tomorrow Searching for a new eternity... Tiring of this twisted nightmare Life beholds nothing for me Death surrounds all that this world is But in the storms you carry me You became the savior of a million souls You came down to us so that the world may know Then atop that bloody hill your love you showed You died for us that day So that the world may see The errors in our ways You came and bled, and rose again So that the world may see In a little church I found you Crying on a bended knee that night In the dark you opened my eyes Opened my eyes so I saw your light Like Samuel who heard the Calling, Each of us has felt the longing Of a life as someone free. Carry me. Me. Hanging on the cross, Bleeding for the lost Iron nails in His hands See the blood he shed Thorns upon his head See the blood he shed for you and me...  This still isn't all...I'll keep the updates coming...
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04-09-2004, 10:13 AM
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| look. look at that girl.  Joined: Apr 2003 Location: oh i'm around here somewhere Posts: 3,889
| LOL brandon you're so funny. i love your writings though-good stuff
__________________ i'd rather be in heaven. aimer-moi, mon amour and oh don't you wish /that things like life/were easy, for/ fools like you? http://www.xanga.com/MonAmi199 <a href="http://facebook.com/p.php?id=68101856&l=6d9e15547c">Facebook me!</a> |
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04-09-2004, 01:45 PM
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| Misunderstood...  Joined: Jan 2003 Location: In a land far far away...it is Posts: 1,578
| good stuff Brandon, good stuff.   ~Rach
__________________ ~Rach  "No temptation has seized you except what is common to man. God is faithful; He will not let you be tempted beyond what you can bear." 1 Corinthians 10:13a Go see my home!  <a href="http://www.malone.edu/1210">Malone</a>Visit my journal! In the M section.... <a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=52979&page=1&pp=15">Rach</a>Blogs I visit: <a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=64922">Brandon</a><a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=77742">Pieter</a><a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=41972">Heather</a><a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=73107">Nathan</a><a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=50212>Sarah</a><a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=54895&page=1&pp=15>Kevin</a><a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=33367">Morgan</a><a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=33582">Mark</a><a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=46214&page=1&pp=15">Zach</a><a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=78989&page=1&pp=15">airsoft</a> Visit my poetry thread...<a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=71303">Poetic Fumbles</a> Feel free to RC anything |
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04-13-2004, 10:33 AM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,776
| Thanks a bunch! For some reason my poetry notebook is missing. That makes me mad. Here's another song...that my sis likes a lot. She always requests it when I do worship service... I see the crystal beauty of the sea I see the works of your love around me Looking out over the rollng hills Lord your wonders they amaze me still The mountains silver peaks All of this beauty speaks of your love Oh! How I love you! Listen to the ocean's roar, The silence of the day before the morning rises and the songbirds wake Rain wash away my tears I know I can find you here and I know You're always near Always near I love the golden tree leaves of the fall The lonely wolf's mournful call' Watching the sun set, around me There's no other place that I'd rather be The mountains silver peaks All of this beauty speaks of your love Oh! How I love you! Listen to the ocean's roar, The silence of the day before the morning rises and the songbirds wake Rain wash away my tears I know I can find you here and I know You're always near Always near There ya go! Another one!
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04-13-2004, 11:42 PM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,776
| Here's one I wrote today... And I found my notebook! Living outside existence Merely breathing to survive Praying for a brief recompense For a sinner still alive If the world stops moving Around this sphere of flame Have I yet a disproving Of an everlasting name? Blood drops as deep as death Dripping from the tree The innocent is left Blood for eternity Show us how to love you Guide our hearts with song Teach us of your love: true. Forgive our every wrong.
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04-13-2004, 11:54 PM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,776
| Ok. These are kinda corny...because I wrote them a long time ago. so... Last night we danced We danced under the stars And the black night, the moon enhanced The air was still, and silent. All but the crickets singing Last night we danced And I can't describe The feeling, the way That you fit into my arms As we danced that way Last night we danced And you rested your head On my shoulder The dance I never wanted to end But the air grows colder Last night we danced But it ended too soon And before you left i got to Kiss you Underneath the moon Yeah. I know. Cheesy. Sorry...
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04-14-2004, 12:14 AM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,776
| Yeah. I understand. It's all about the rules i know your games i know the way to play show me your best show me your worst i can take the pains i know how it feels i know how the blood flows i know how the pain goes don't cry anymore |
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04-14-2004, 09:01 AM
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| look. look at that girl. Joined: Apr 2003 Location: oh i'm around here somewhere Posts: 3,889
| wow. brandon that last one is awesome.
__________________ i'd rather be in heaven. aimer-moi, mon amour and oh don't you wish /that things like life/were easy, for/ fools like you? http://www.xanga.com/MonAmi199 <a href="http://facebook.com/p.php?id=68101856&l=6d9e15547c">Facebook me!</a> |
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04-14-2004, 10:25 AM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,776
| Thanks Karin. Lying in the depth of night Crying in the darkness Serving not a force of Light Living in the darkness You still cannot hear despite My screaming in the darkness Blood drips from my heavy wounds Lying in the darkness Searching for another clue Hunting in the darkness Living not because of you But dying for the darkness Lift my chin wash my tears Cast away the darkness Heal the scars of recent years Bring me from the darkness Delve deep into my hardest fears Burn them with the darkness Yet there is hope in every life Joy in the fleeing Darkness
__________________ <marquee> I rise up like the pheonix from the ashes of an older way with wisdom gained, I turn away </marquee> Last edited by Brandon; 04-14-2004 at 10:27 AM. Reason: because those last lines didnt seem right... |
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04-15-2004, 12:05 AM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,776
| Oh boy. That one was good i thought... and...maybe not... Let the tide wash over me Give me a decent elegy Tell the people of my simple story Show them my little beauty But Don't show them the scars The blood stains engraved in my skin Don't show what I was As a hermit within Don't sing them my song of failure and pain Don't say "it wasn't long, before he fell to shame" Don't let them see marks my weary hand carved with a blade of remorse on my covered arms So What do you say? To an faceless, sad crowd When the one that they loved became much too proud? What do you say? about his short life and who do you tell about that damned knife? Maybe The throng just won't ask Perhaps they'll never know About my dull mask and my light-hearted show Then again Time just might heal my slashes of shame one day i might feel As a child once again
__________________ <marquee> I rise up like the pheonix from the ashes of an older way with wisdom gained, I turn away </marquee> Last edited by Brandon; 04-15-2004 at 10:26 AM. |
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04-15-2004, 12:13 AM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,776
| Screams In the night I look around for the source Blood Dripping off Cut not long before Who Is crying Aloud for someone Why Are they here? What do they want? Wait Is it me? Is it my misery? Stop Let it go I wish it could be Live Why should I The pain never stopped Bleed Does it hurt Tell me it can't Cut Did I flirt With death once again? Black Surrounds me I fall to the floor Where Am I now Where was I before Start Renew this Cycle of pain
__________________ <marquee> I rise up like the pheonix from the ashes of an older way with wisdom gained, I turn away </marquee> Last edited by Brandon; 04-15-2004 at 10:23 AM. |
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04-15-2004, 10:31 AM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,776
| Beginning to end A circle of pain Without my consent The hurt starts again Tell me it's gone Lie to me once more I still haven't found That glorious door The haze blinds me My eyes cannot see The feelings entwining A spirit that's free Once again they come These marks on my arm I wander alone And sing of my scars
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04-15-2004, 01:13 PM
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| look. look at that girl. Joined: Apr 2003 Location: oh i'm around here somewhere Posts: 3,889
| wow brandon...just, wow.
__________________ i'd rather be in heaven. aimer-moi, mon amour and oh don't you wish /that things like life/were easy, for/ fools like you? http://www.xanga.com/MonAmi199 <a href="http://facebook.com/p.php?id=68101856&l=6d9e15547c">Facebook me!</a> |
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