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Old 04-20-2004, 11:09 AM   #46
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Stand up to my enemies
That curse my dreary breath
Show them my weaknesses
That nobody should know of yet
Let them hurl hateful words
May they sting like fire
I will stand up to their insults
No matter the pain, and defeat

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Old 04-20-2004, 01:15 PM   #47
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nice very nice
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Life, that, that belongs to God. There is no room for flesh in me.
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Old 04-20-2004, 02:27 PM   #48
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Go ahead
Laugh at my wounds
I don't care
I will leave soon
Look at me
See the pale scars
Can't you see
I have gone far
Wipe the blood
That I have shed
Comfort me
While I hang my head

Let me cry
Don't let me die...
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Old 04-20-2004, 02:30 PM   #49
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Like a washing tide
My time on Earth draws near
And as I gaze outside
I gather all my fear

Like a biting snake
The blade slides over me
And with each slash I take
More blood runs ever deep

With each cut, a tear falls down
And yet deeper I push my steel
There is no stopping now
The pain I no more feel

Like a raging flood
The hurt silences me
With a deafening scream
I then cut myself free
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Old 04-20-2004, 11:38 PM   #50
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Like a washing tide
My time on Earth draws near
And as I gaze outside
I gather all my fear

Like a biting snake
The blade slides over me
And with each slash I take
More blood runs ever deep

With each cut, a tear falls down
And yet deeper I push my steel
There is no stopping now
The pain I no more feel

Like a raging flood
The hurt silences me
With a deafening scream
I then cut myself free
i like this one...how did you feel when you wrote this one?
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Life, that, that belongs to God. There is no room for flesh in me.
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Old 04-20-2004, 11:50 PM   #51
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how does it sound?

suicidal...
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Old 04-20-2004, 11:52 PM   #52
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how does it sound?

suicidal...
yep. i think i know why though...
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Life, that, that belongs to God. There is no room for flesh in me.
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Old 04-21-2004, 12:00 AM   #53
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How would you feel
If I were to leave
Using my steel
Under my sleeve
Would you cry? no
I doubt that much is true
Just let me go
I still love you
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Old 04-21-2004, 02:59 PM   #54
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Looking to the shore
Sinking without energy
My soul cries out for more
More friends, less enemies
I cry to exist
I want to be free
But I won't be missed
You won't miss me.
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Old 04-21-2004, 03:12 PM   #55
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yep. i think i know why though...
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Old 04-21-2004, 03:15 PM   #56
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Listening to endless dreams
Wondering what all this means
I don't understand life, anymore
Show me ways to understand
How my life goes hand in hand
With this fading, reality

Exclusion
You don't know how I feel
Intrusion
You can't know how I feel
Seclusion
Just leave me alone...

Alone...to do...

What I may
"-- be true...
This Day"
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Old 04-21-2004, 03:29 PM   #57
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I cry to exist
I want to be free
But I won't be missed
That bit is great. Good stuff.
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Old 04-21-2004, 03:50 PM   #58
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emotion, love it
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Old 04-21-2004, 05:09 PM   #59
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i like the last 3 lines
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Old 04-22-2004, 10:55 AM   #60
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i like the last 3 lines
"blade be true this day"?
i don't like them...
maybe i'm thinking the wrong poem...


Landsliding
Suck the atmosphere
Away from my lips
Rip the carpet of grass
Out from under
me. Yet i falter
struggle to stand
up without you

I can't do it
i cannot stand
without a handhold
but I've been
holding onto
all the wrong things
things that let me-
keep me sliding
down.

Always down.
I want to stand
again
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