04-20-2004, 11:09 AM
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#46 | | Is Back!
Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| Stand up to my enemies
That curse my dreary breath
Show them my weaknesses
That nobody should know of yet
Let them hurl hateful words
May they sting like fire
I will stand up to their insults
No matter the pain, and defeat
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04-20-2004, 01:15 PM
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#47 | | PASSION!!
Joined: Nov 2003 Location: Wandering mindlessly around th Posts: 852
| nice very nice
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04-20-2004, 02:27 PM
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#48 | | Is Back!
Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| Go ahead
Laugh at my wounds
I don't care
I will leave soon
Look at me
See the pale scars
Can't you see
I have gone far
Wipe the blood
That I have shed
Comfort me
While I hang my head
Let me cry
Don't let me die...
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04-20-2004, 02:30 PM
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#49 | | Is Back!
Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| Like a washing tide
My time on Earth draws near
And as I gaze outside
I gather all my fear
Like a biting snake
The blade slides over me
And with each slash I take
More blood runs ever deep
With each cut, a tear falls down
And yet deeper I push my steel
There is no stopping now
The pain I no more feel
Like a raging flood
The hurt silences me
With a deafening scream
I then cut myself free
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04-20-2004, 11:38 PM
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#50 | | PASSION!!
Joined: Nov 2003 Location: Wandering mindlessly around th Posts: 852
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Originally Posted by Brandon Like a washing tide
My time on Earth draws near
And as I gaze outside
I gather all my fear
Like a biting snake
The blade slides over me
And with each slash I take
More blood runs ever deep
With each cut, a tear falls down
And yet deeper I push my steel
There is no stopping now
The pain I no more feel
Like a raging flood
The hurt silences me
With a deafening scream
I then cut myself free | i like this one...how did you feel when you wrote this one?
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04-20-2004, 11:50 PM
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#51 | | Is Back!
Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| how does it sound?
suicidal...
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04-20-2004, 11:52 PM
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#52 | | PASSION!!
Joined: Nov 2003 Location: Wandering mindlessly around th Posts: 852
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Originally Posted by Brandon how does it sound?
suicidal... | yep. i think i know why though...
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04-21-2004, 12:00 AM
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#53 | | Is Back!
Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| How would you feel
If I were to leave
Using my steel
Under my sleeve
Would you cry? no
I doubt that much is true
Just let me go
I still love you
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04-21-2004, 02:59 PM
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#54 | | Is Back!
Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| Looking to the shore
Sinking without energy
My soul cries out for more
More friends, less enemies
I cry to exist
I want to be free
But I won't be missed
You won't miss me.
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04-21-2004, 03:12 PM
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#55 | | Is Back!
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Originally Posted by *Rei* yep. i think i know why though... | ?
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04-21-2004, 03:15 PM
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#56 | | Is Back!
Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| Listening to endless dreams
Wondering what all this means
I don't understand life, anymore
Show me ways to understand
How my life goes hand in hand
With this fading, reality
Exclusion
You don't know how I feel
Intrusion
You can't know how I feel
Seclusion
Just leave me alone...
Alone...to do...
What I may
"-- be true...
This Day"
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04-21-2004, 03:29 PM
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#57 | | Follows trends...
Joined: Dec 2002 Location: Rock you like a hurricuhn! Posts: 4,754
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Originally Posted by Brandon I cry to exist
I want to be free
But I won't be missed | That bit is great. Good stuff. |
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04-21-2004, 03:50 PM
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#58 | | PASSION!!
Joined: Nov 2003 Location: Wandering mindlessly around th Posts: 852
| emotion, love it
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04-21-2004, 05:09 PM
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#59 | | look. look at that girl.
Joined: Apr 2003 Location: oh i'm around here somewhere Posts: 3,704
| i like the last 3 lines
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aimer-moi, mon amour and oh don't you wish
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04-22-2004, 10:55 AM
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#60 | | Is Back!
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Originally Posted by Ayria i like the last 3 lines | "blade be true this day"?
i don't like them...
maybe i'm thinking the wrong poem...
Landsliding
Suck the atmosphere
Away from my lips
Rip the carpet of grass
Out from under
me. Yet i falter
struggle to stand
up without you
I can't do it
i cannot stand
without a handhold
but I've been
holding onto
all the wrong things
things that let me-
keep me sliding
down.
Always down.
I want to stand
again
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