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04-18-2004, 10:02 PM
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| Is Back!  Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
  | that is very freaky...cause that's how I felt last friday... woah... yeah...i'll try not rhyming...
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04-18-2004, 11:23 PM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| Ok. let's try not to rhyme here... I remember yesterday The pain that kills me yet What happens when the hurt is gone And I'm just a numb, lifeless, fool What comes after the screaming rage That laughs inside my soul Am I stuck with yesterday Can I carry on What happens when tommorow Never brings a song
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04-18-2004, 11:33 PM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| Suppose the melody drowns out the helpless cries Or when distant memory floods your constant lies Where do you run When cliffs end at your feet Can you hide from the rising sun Or can you flee from anything at all? Suppose it's all over Today or the next Pretend I never cried to you Believe I was strong
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04-19-2004, 12:11 AM
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| PASSION!!  Joined: Nov 2003 Location: Wandering mindlessly around th Posts: 852
| wow these are good....i am really likeing themm.....you got MAD SKILLS........ ok cheesy yes.....truthful....as always
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04-19-2004, 12:18 AM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| thanks *blushes*
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04-19-2004, 07:36 AM
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| Who knows?  Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 4,784
| hey brandon, they;re both really good...and don't worry too hard about trying not to rhyme..I like rhyming.  haha.
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04-19-2004, 03:40 PM
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| Misunderstood...  Joined: Jan 2003 Location: In a land far far away...it is Posts: 1,579
| wow...how did I miss these?? I feel like crap... you cannot say you have no talent ever again Brandon, these are awesome. I love them...totally honest, and just plain...good....  I love them. I used to love rhyme...until my free-verse was just so good-sounding...and my rhymes were all cheesy...then I gave up.  ~Rach 
__________________ ~Rach "No temptation has seized you except what is common to man. God is faithful; He will not let you be tempted beyond what you can bear." 1 Corinthians 10:13a Go see my home!  <a href="http://www.malone.edu/1210">Malone</a>Visit my journal! In the M section....  <a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=52979&page=1&pp=15">Rach</a>Blogs I visit: <a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=64922">Brandon</a><a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=77742">Pieter</a><a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=41972">Heather</a><a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=73107">Nathan</a><a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=50212>Sarah</a><a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=54895&page=1&pp=15>Kevin</a><a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=33367">Morgan</a><a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=33582">Mark</a><a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=46214&page=1&pp=15">Zach</a><a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=78989&page=1&pp=15">airsoft</a> Visit my poetry thread...<a href="http://www.christianguitar.org/forums/showthread.php?t=71303">Poetic Fumbles</a> Feel free to RC anything |
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04-19-2004, 10:54 PM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| Sing to me Sing me a song Sing to me softly And Don't shed your tears That I know I'm causing Please Show me your fears Trust me to listen Then When you break down My shoulder I've given Cry to me
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04-19-2004, 10:57 PM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| Confusion Ticks like the endless bomb Illusions Surround my every vision Struggling Fighting with every nightmare You're dying Why could I not be there?
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04-19-2004, 10:57 PM
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| PASSION!! Joined: Nov 2003 Location: Wandering mindlessly around th Posts: 852
| *starts crying* that is very very emotional, in such little wording...i am liking that....dont know why its just wow....yea...wow....i am speechless...but not tearless
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04-19-2004, 11:06 PM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| Live the endless dream Tell me what you see Am I who I seem Or do you see more of me I didn't want your thoughts I don't want to see your pain Tell me what you've got To try and help again I don't know why I fail I know it makes you cry When I draw the sail Can I say goodbye? Do you know my song Or if my winds are true Can I ever not be wrong Can i ever...be like you...
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04-20-2004, 06:58 AM
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| look. look at that girl.  Joined: Apr 2003 Location: oh i'm around here somewhere Posts: 3,704
| brandon i love the last one.
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04-20-2004, 08:12 AM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| thanks Karin! I'll have more later...
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04-20-2004, 10:35 AM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| I see your faces Staring me down Dreaming of places Where warriors drown Those weary of fighting The feelings inside They whisper while dying "This hurting won't hide" I don't want to know you All I give is pain Perhaps if I left you You won't hurt again I'm sick of my fears That wash o'er me like a flood I don't want your tears When you see my blood
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04-20-2004, 10:38 AM
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| Is Back! Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| Show me a sunset Of golden rays and light That filter the clouds With heavenly beams Just like the sunset My golden flow draws slight Soon i will vanish Into the night What then, oh dear friend Will happen to me Is my time over Beore it should be
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