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Old 02-25-2005, 01:49 PM   #151
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Haha very nice. You just had a Heather moment there

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Old 02-25-2005, 02:08 PM   #152
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Haha very nice. You just had a Heather moment there
aww! really!? i feel so special now! (no pun intended...but...)
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Old 02-25-2005, 02:41 PM   #153
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Hahaha. Silly boy.
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Old 03-02-2005, 04:49 PM   #154
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New poems! Yayses!

Seems that I
Have traveled far from home
And this road
Get's sadder as I go
Gone too far
With too heavy a load
I want to go
To where I call my home
But I don't want
To be there alone

I know this now
It's not what it seems,
I've realized how
In drunken midnight dreams
And in the wake of joy and laughter
The tears come falling hard soon after...

I just don't want to live away...

...alone...
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Old 03-02-2005, 04:53 PM   #155
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Living in a separate sorrow
On a lonesome, chilling road
Unpaved, never a bright tomorrow
My heavy debts a burdened load
I press onward with no cause,
A surging, pressured will to live
A darkened, sinking slip to death
Teardrops stain my heavy loss

The crystal dreams of elegance
Fade, in bloody tides
The sweetly singing melodies
Behind, my smiles hides...

I scream out desparately
On my calloused knees
I've gone so far from good
This darkness all I see

I'm broken now!
I've fallen down
A crumpled heap
upon the ground!
Can I pick myself up?

Will you help?
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Old 03-09-2005, 04:45 PM   #156
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ha! poems!
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Old 03-09-2005, 10:02 PM   #157
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I saw them... you going to give more?
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Old 03-11-2005, 12:44 PM   #158
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what!? are you not HAPPY with THESE!?

gah!
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Old 09-12-2005, 10:42 AM   #159
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Slivers of broken dreams
Fall from an empty soul
Nothing's ever what it seems
Nothing makes me whole
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Old 09-28-2005, 10:47 AM   #160
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Have I told you lately that I love you?

of course I did

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Old 09-28-2005, 02:04 PM   #161
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thanks

new ones new ones!

Story of...

He always tried to do his best
From when he was a boy
A silent and unwritten test
For a father's love and joy

He never was the sporting type
But for daddy he would try
And sometimes in the dark of night
He'd sit alone and cry

As he grew the test became impossible
His father's expectations grew
And the tears came even harder every night
As he silently withdrew

Sometimes he would hurt all day
And sometimes he felt fine
Slowly losing faith
He's slowly losing time

Seems no matter what he did
It wasn't good enough
In his darkened heart he hid
Crying out for a father's love

Then one night he finally lost his happiness
As the knife slid down his arm
But the blood drops only added to the mess
On a one way street of harm

Sometimes he can't find the day
He tries so hard to find
Just and ounce of faith
And just enough in time...
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Old 09-28-2005, 02:36 PM   #162
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hey ... i like the poem! It's good but why does it have to be depressing?
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Old 09-28-2005, 02:56 PM   #163
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Read my first post on this thread. it explains. I hate that a lot of mine are depressing, but they are a way to vent, a way to express feelings tht otherwise would ferment in my soul. poetry is my outlet. it's depressing because that is how i lived, that is how i handled my father. i have a cheery one somewhere...

i'll find it and post...

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Old 09-28-2005, 09:09 PM   #164
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Ohh...I really like it Brandon. Glad to see you back to writing...I miss your poems. *sadface* goodness...I plain miss you
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Old 09-28-2005, 10:43 PM   #165
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yay happy poems! I've got a bunch in the freestyle thread that are mostly silly nonsense ... some aren't totally but mostly just fun!
I really like yours cause they have rhythm and they rhyme!

yeah it's good you can get your feelings out ... did i say I really think they're good? well I do!
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