02-25-2005, 01:49 PM
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#151 | | Love, love me do...
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| Haha very nice. You just had a Heather moment there
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<marquee> It's like that there's a music, playing in your ear And I'm listening, and I'm listening, and then I disappear And then I feel a change, like a fire deep inside Something bursting me wide open, impossible to hide And suddenly I'm flying, flying like a bird Like Electricity, electricity Sparks inside of me, and I'm free, I'm free </marquee> |
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02-25-2005, 02:08 PM
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#152 | | Is Back!
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Originally Posted by GRibbit Haha very nice. You just had a Heather moment there  | aww! really!? i feel so special now! (no pun intended...but...)
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02-25-2005, 02:41 PM
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#153 | | Love, love me do...
Joined: Jun 2002 Location: In a....BUBBLE! Don't get too Posts: 10,348
| Hahaha. Silly boy.
__________________ "God loves you just as you are, but he loves you too much to leave you there."
- Max Lucado
<marquee> It's like that there's a music, playing in your ear And I'm listening, and I'm listening, and then I disappear And then I feel a change, like a fire deep inside Something bursting me wide open, impossible to hide And suddenly I'm flying, flying like a bird Like Electricity, electricity Sparks inside of me, and I'm free, I'm free </marquee> |
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03-02-2005, 04:49 PM
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#154 | | Is Back!
Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| New poems! Yayses!
Seems that I
Have traveled far from home
And this road
Get's sadder as I go
Gone too far
With too heavy a load
I want to go
To where I call my home
But I don't want
To be there alone
I know this now
It's not what it seems,
I've realized how
In drunken midnight dreams
And in the wake of joy and laughter
The tears come falling hard soon after...
I just don't want to live away...
...alone...
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03-02-2005, 04:53 PM
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#155 | | Is Back!
Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| Living in a separate sorrow
On a lonesome, chilling road
Unpaved, never a bright tomorrow
My heavy debts a burdened load
I press onward with no cause,
A surging, pressured will to live
A darkened, sinking slip to death
Teardrops stain my heavy loss
The crystal dreams of elegance
Fade, in bloody tides
The sweetly singing melodies
Behind, my smiles hides...
I scream out desparately
On my calloused knees
I've gone so far from good
This darkness all I see
I'm broken now!
I've fallen down
A crumpled heap
upon the ground!
Can I pick myself up?
Will you help?
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03-09-2005, 04:45 PM
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#156 | | Is Back!
Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| ha! poems!
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03-09-2005, 10:02 PM
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#157 | | Misunderstood...
Joined: Jan 2003 Location: In a land far far away...it is Posts: 1,579
| I saw them...  you going to give more? |
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03-11-2005, 12:44 PM
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#158 | | Is Back!
Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| what!? are you not HAPPY with THESE!?
gah!
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09-12-2005, 10:42 AM
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#159 | | Is Back!
Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| Slivers of broken dreams
Fall from an empty soul
Nothing's ever what it seems
Nothing makes me whole
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09-28-2005, 10:47 AM
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#160 | | Me and my Babe
Joined: Jun 2004 Location: Nowheresville Posts: 466
| Have I told you lately that I love you?
of course I did
Becky |
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09-28-2005, 02:04 PM
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#161 | | Is Back!
Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| thanks
new ones new ones! Story of...
He always tried to do his best
From when he was a boy
A silent and unwritten test
For a father's love and joy
He never was the sporting type
But for daddy he would try
And sometimes in the dark of night
He'd sit alone and cry
As he grew the test became impossible
His father's expectations grew
And the tears came even harder every night
As he silently withdrew
Sometimes he would hurt all day
And sometimes he felt fine
Slowly losing faith
He's slowly losing time
Seems no matter what he did
It wasn't good enough
In his darkened heart he hid
Crying out for a father's love
Then one night he finally lost his happiness
As the knife slid down his arm
But the blood drops only added to the mess
On a one way street of harm
Sometimes he can't find the day
He tries so hard to find
Just and ounce of faith
And just enough in time...
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09-28-2005, 02:36 PM
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#162 | | Smile, God loves you!
Joined: Jul 2005 Location: somewhere in Canada Posts: 138
| hey ... i like the poem! It's good but why does it have to be depressing? |
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09-28-2005, 02:56 PM
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#163 | | Is Back!
Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Russellville, Arkansas Posts: 1,746
| Read my first post on this thread. it explains. I hate that a lot of mine are depressing, but they are a way to vent, a way to express feelings tht otherwise would ferment in my soul. poetry is my outlet. it's depressing because that is how i lived, that is how i handled my father. i have a cheery one somewhere...
i'll find it and post...
k?
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09-28-2005, 09:09 PM
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#164 | | Misunderstood...
Joined: Jan 2003 Location: In a land far far away...it is Posts: 1,579
| Ohh...I really like it Brandon. Glad to see you back to writing...I miss your poems. *sadface* goodness...I plain miss you |
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09-28-2005, 10:43 PM
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#165 | | Smile, God loves you!
Joined: Jul 2005 Location: somewhere in Canada Posts: 138
| yay happy poems! I've got a bunch in the freestyle thread that are mostly silly nonsense ... some aren't totally but mostly just fun!
I really like yours cause they have rhythm and they rhyme!
yeah it's good you can get your feelings out ... did i say I really think they're good? well I do! |
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