[hapa_angel]

wow.... thanx you guys!


New song - Over (in my blog)

[hapa_angel]

whoop de do... I made a cd. Sure, a crappy, homemade one, but it's still a CD. Ten songs. I will attempt to upload the files... but if this doesn't work, PM me if you want a copy.

EDIT: nope, the files are too big, like i thought. so here's what the cover looks like. my last offer still stands tho.

[guitarfan01]

Well, I can't hear them! grrr

[hapa_angel]

...you can PM me with your e-mail and I can send them to you... CGR's attachment size limits prevent me from posting my songs in their entirety, and I don't know if posting half a song would be as satisfying.

[hapa_angel]

I now have a soundclick account at http://www.soundclick.com/rachelpickerel... so check it out if you want to hear my songs in their entirety.

[emo_boy]

You have a bueatiful voice. You need to make a demo and pursue getting a record label. Wow i wish i could sing that good lol.

[hapa_angel]

thank you!


Here's half a chorus. It's all I've got so far...

unfinished

[hapa_angel]

and here's the rest of the song, all finished as of the wee hours of Tuesday morning.

Dissonance

You've got your issues, and I've got mine
This would never work out
Feels like I'm falling into your grasp
Even with my doubts


Moving forward, moving fast
My heart is like a piece of glass
I'm scared to think what happens next
Cuz even tho it goes against
The visions in my brain, I love you anyway
Anyway

So many worries, so much fear
I've been dragging my feet
Too busy to notice things have changed
I'm at the edge of my seat


Hurry up and hold back
Don't know how long this will last
I'm scared to think what happens next
Cuz even tho it goes against
The visions in my brain, I love you anyway
Anyway

Don't let the moments just waste away
Talk for hours, still have more to say
That's ok


Early winter, autumn rain
Watch me as I go insane
I'm scared to think what happens next
Cuz even tho it goes against
The visions in my brain, I love you anyway
Ever-moving, ever changed
Everything is rearranged
I'm scared to think what happens next
Cuz even tho it goes against
The visions in my brain, I love you anyway
Anyway

[tryingmybest]

... My favorite so far!

[hapa_angel]

haha, thanks Laura.


Maybe cuz I don't have a good version of Disappeared up on my soundclick yet... that's a good one, got some good reviews.

[Gustin]

Originally Posted by hapa_angel

and here's the rest of the song, all finished as of the wee hours of Tuesday morning.

wow... good song.. really like this song... your voice is VERY good.... im gonna go to your soundclick account and listen to some more... very nice though....

[hapa_angel]

lol thanks.


New half a song. Two verses and a mayyybe chorus... i'll post what i have down so far though.


sinking in the sand / just a faceless name
how'd i fall so far / when everyday's the same
and everything's so wrong / such a lovely mess
the knowledge that i had / was only second-best

sinking in the sand / just a nameless face
i thought i knew it all / and that's what led me to this place
i brought it on myself / i acted like a fool
(blah blah blah) / (something, something about) You

(insert chorus here)

[hapa_angel]

Same thing, more complete.

Gone, Gone

sinking in the sand / just a faceless name
how'd i fall so far / when everyday's the same
and everything's so wrong / such a lovely mess
the knowledge that i had / was only second-best

sinking in the sand / just a nameless face
i thought i knew it all / and that's what led me to this place
i brought it on myself / i acted like a fool
the road that i went down / led me far away from You

I miss the things I thought I used to have (gone, gone)
I still want to go where I never have (gone, gone)
I don't know why I got here
But now You're makeing it so clear / That You're near
And all along, You weren't
Gone, gone / Gone, gone

[hapa_angel]

More finished.... still working on the bridge.

Gone, Gone

sinking in the sand / just a faceless name
how'd i fall so far / when everyday's the same
and everything's so wrong / such a lovely mess
the knowledge that i had / was only second-best

sinking in the sand / just a nameless face
i thought i knew it all / and that's what led me to this place
i brought it on myself / i acted like a fool
the road that i went down / led me far away from You

I miss the things I thought I used to have (gone, gone)
I still want to go where I never have (gone, gone)
I don't know why I got here
But now You're makeing it so clear / That You're near
And all along, You weren't
Gone, gone / Gone, gone

sinking in the sand / slipping out of reach
falling further down / but I can't even see my feet
I've been here before / but not as low as now
I want to come back / but I don't know how

(chorus)

struggling with my depression / rid me of my imperfections, yeah
(add more here when I come up with it)





clip still forthcoming.

[hapa_angel]

Oh, I finished Gone, Gone. Just saying. No finished clip as of yet though. Next time maybe.



New snippet. Unfinished. And untitled as of yet.


In a world of concrete evidence
I find myself incomplete

I got used to disillusion
And swallowed all the lies

Now I see that I was living
in a candy-coated, homogenized
paradise