Not bad... There's a few things that are missing like the G# to G kicks on every chorus (And the intro. You only have it on the final chorus). And also, some of the octave lead is done with slides rather than just plain old jumping to the notes. The lead riff on the verses is also off a little bit I think, but I'm not totally sure. And where the instrumental break is between the first chorus and the second verse. The last "10"(F) is not only vibrato, but also a pinch harmonic.
Other than that, it's definately better than I could do. Nice job!