[hapa_angel]

Originally Posted by Rachel

Hey Rach! I really like some of these...

And don't get too upset about no responses...I have a poetry thread, and I get almost no (RC)s...and only occasional comments.

But I still write a lot...haha... Anyways...keep it up...you are a good writer.

Haha... yeah, I know how it is. I posted that little comment last year, if you'll check the date. If I spent more time in here, I would comment on others' writings, but sadly I don't. I just post and run, for the most part.

Originally Posted by Matty

I really connect with brokenness to humility.

I think that likelihood is too vague, though. perhaps success or victory would fit better.

Likelihood is better that the first word that came to mind, however. "Impossible becomes.. probable.. so, probability!" Haha.

But now, I don't wanna steal your words or suggestions... I'll think about it some more, see what else I can come up with.




Anyway, more stuff, mostly song pieces. Here's a few little unfinished snippets I've jotted down over the past few weeks or more.

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don't shelve me away
with the
pretty faces on jewel cases
with nothing to say
you've gotta find something deeper
than today

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now I see
that I was living
in a candy-coated
homogenized paradise

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help me to stare down
the demons that I face
'cause they're getting on my case
constantly

[hapa_angel]

How come I never do what’s right
I try and try with all my might
To no avail
I dig myself into a pit
Try to escape when I’m sick of it
But I fail
I never meant to string you along
But somehow I keep leading you on
And I worry
As much fun as it was to me
This thing was never meant to be
And I’m sorry

[hapa_angel]

yet again i lie awake
toss and turn until daybreak
slowly, surely, go insane
sleep has long since left my veins
twilight, midnight, six a.m.
thinking about you again
how i caused you so much pain
floods of tears, fall like rain
never meant to hurt you so
hoping you can let it go
and forgive me for my part
how i managed to break your heart
dragged it through all kinds of crud
now my tears add to the flood
but we’ll stop crying eventually
over what can never be

[Nate]

Haha. "crud." Haha.

No... it's not bad. It's just such a 90's word. Like "swol."

Ok. I have absolutely nothing worth saying.

[hapa_angel]

It was either that or "mud."




Thanks for commenting anyway. At least someone did. For once. =/

[hapa_angel]

forgot all the words
I wanted to say to you
I was so enthralled


[/random haiku]

[hapa_angel]

Loperamide, oh loperamide, how I so despise thee.
But when the things I eat go down and sting like poison ivy
It is then I eat you again and know how much I need thee
Loperamide, oh loperamide, how I so despise thee.

[guitarfan01]

eeeee.

[hapa_angel]

Originally Posted by guitarfan01

eeeee.

Hahahaha. Yeah... that's no fun. But that poem kinda was... in that it was poking fun of it and written on a spur of the moment... heh.

[hapa_angel]

Oh yeah, this exists.

And I never linked this way back when.


I haven't been writing as much in recent years as I used to. I blame lack of inspiration. It's more difficult to find a place of inspiration from looking outside your window after midnight when all you can see is drunk kids being stupid (and loud). I used to be able to glance at a thin strip of the Pacific, with plenty of sky around it. [/whining]

Anyhow. Here's a couple of lines I typed up the other week. There was more to it, but heck if I can remember it now.

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And don't you hate how the lessons learned best
Come solely at another's expense

[Micaela]

mmm...*nod* sadly true. How are you? long time no talk!

[snowboarderTim]

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