[Rainer.]

I've put some notes in the first page of your story Galen. One or two grammarical errors. The language you use really doesn't grab me. Be more descriptive and use stronger verbs.

[ChristinaE]

*smiles and nods* yeah.....

[Beth]

hehe, verbs are pretty.

[ConceivedInFire]

Originally Posted by Beth

hehe, verbs are pretty.

How can an action be pretty? Adverbs and Adjectives are the pretty ones,

[ChristinaE]

Originally Posted by ConceivedInFire

How can an action be pretty? Adverbs and Adjectives are the pretty ones,

I know..how can verbs be pretty¿¿¿¿ haha i just figured out how to do a upside down question marks muhaha!! sorry..*clears throat*

[ConceivedInFire]

yeah, Alt,1,6,8, isn't it?

Now you can ask Spanish stuff like: ¿Por que?

[ChristinaE]

Originally Posted by ConceivedInFire

yeah, Alt,1,6,8, isn't it?

Now you can ask Spanish stuff like: ¿Por que?

lol no..but my father can..he tried teaching us but it didn't work out..lol!

[GMartin2R]

Originally Posted by rainer123

Everything I can think of is at least $150... Of course, I would like to see that 1980's PRS custom 24 under the tree...

lool oh sure that's going to happen... :kwink:

yeah, Alt,1,6,8, isn't it?

no it's alt 0191

[Ardent1]

Hi Galen!! I'm sorry to hear about your grandfather's death. But it must be so wonderful to think about his meeting with the LORD.
Now for some catching up...
Random: I've been meaning to ask how you pronounce your name.

Originally Posted by Galen

I asked him about it afterwards, and he told me it was called "Everything" by a band called Lifehouse.

WHOA, you've never heard of Lifehouse?? Jeezaloo, Galen, where have you been??

Originally Posted by Galen

I'm going to turn in an application for Little Caesars Pizza tomorrow.

mm...crazy bread.

Originally Posted by Galen

1. Collide by Skillet

What do you think of Kori's (Skillet's keyboarder) keyboarding, Galen?

Other influences are Kerry Livgren, formerly of Kansas; Steve Walsh, of Kansas

YAY Kansas!

I can understand and speak some Spanish, and I know the tiniest smidgen of Klingon and Elvish (esp Sindarin elvish). (Yes, I am a dork.)

But the best kind of dork! Reminds me kinda of that guy on Daddy Day Care.

Now if you've ever been to San Angelo, you know what that means. If you haven't, I'll tell you. San Angelo water is the worst, most foul, evillest brew known to man. It has more calcium than milk and tastes like poison. Too much of it will probably give you stomach cancer. I had to put huge gobs of sugar into it to kill the taste, and even so, it was starting to make me feel sick, so I threw it away. And that is San Angelo water.

Oi, it sounds horrible. You need to move down here, bro.

I had the best freakin post on here, and guess what!?!? AUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

URg, that stinks. I know the feeling.

WOULD YOU RATHER BE A HOBBIT, AN ELF OR A DWARF? An elf, probably, I enjoy archery more than chopping wood or throwing stones. And I would like to be tall.

teehee..elves are sexy.

WRITE A LINE FROM ANY SONG. I wanna go deeper, but I dont know how to swim.

I love old skool delirous?...well, I love all delirious?.
Well, you weren't kidding when you said there were many new pages to read. hehe. Later.
-angela-

[guitarfan01]

Originally Posted by Angela the Warrior Angel

Hi Galen!! I'm sorry to hear about your grandfather's death. But it must be so wonderful to think about his meeting with the LORD.

Random: I've been meaning to ask how you pronounce your name.

gay-lehn.

WHOA, you've never heard of Lifehouse?? Jeezaloo, Galen, where have you been??

Under the Rock.

What do you think of Kori's (Skillet's keyboarder) keyboarding, Galen?

I think Mrs. Cooper is very talented, but I don't have a keyboard with an arpeggiator, or that does those cool "elephant-on-helium" sounds, so I can't really be influenced by her yet.

YAY Kansas!

oh, yeah. Have you heard their completely Christian album, Somewhere to Elsewhere (2000, Magna Carta)?

Oi, it sounds horrible. You need to move down here, bro.

Yeah...

teehee..elves are sexy.

Well, then I guess I'm no elf.

I love old skool delirous?...well, I love all delirious?.

Delirious rocks.

Well, you weren't kidding when you said there were many new pages to read. hehe. Later.
-angela-

Thanks for dropping by! I pray you feel better!

And now, some images for my new sig:

[Ardent1]

Originally Posted by Galen

oh, yeah. Have you heard their completely Christian album, Somewhere to Elsewhere (2000, Magna Carta)?

Nope.

Well, then I guess I'm no elf.

Aw, stop putting yourself down. You know, I think Galen kinda sounds like an elf's name..

Thanks for dropping by! I pray you feel better!

Thanks, bro.

[Rainer.]

Originally Posted by GMartin2R

lool oh sure that's going to happen... :kwink:

Of course it'll happen. theft is always an option... I'll make it work somehow...

So, how's your day Galen?

[guitarfan01]

Pretty good, I'm working on revising the story, thanks for your constructive criticism. I have to warn you, I didn't agree with it all, but I think version 3 will be the best yet (what I posted the other day was version 2)! Have I repped you for the criticism yet?

How do you do the strikethrough, btw? I'm also working on a news post tomorrow... I once again learned something deep at SNL last night . Something that I posted about on thursday...I think. (but not in here)

Galen

[Rainer.]

Yeah some of it could go either way. i was just throuwing out suggestions. I do like the storyline so far! (post the new versions so I can go throught the other pages. I just read the 1st page!)

To do the strike, use (s), except ( is < and ) is >

[guitarfan01]

Thank you, and I will post it soon... tomorrow sometime. (If I ever finish cleaning up my room, lol )

Galen