[the flamingo]

hey guys.. this is the first song i'm going to be posting here... i just thought i'd open this up for opinions.

a little background before you listen: i've been playing guitar for roughly 3 years now, and i'm not all that great. i suppose you can judge my skill through listening to the clip. however, i didn't go through and spend a lot of time on this recording because it's not the final product or anything.

the end part is up for grabs at the moment. i'm like the momentum it has, but i wanted to see if other people felt the same, or whatever... whatever you guys want to say about it...

if you listen to it and have no opinions/comments, that's ok too i suppose, but if you could just let me know that, that would be awesome, thanks!

http://rakel.us/music/yet_another_untitled1.mp3


whooooo.. i hope you guys like it ^_^

[Nathanael]

Me likey

[the flamingo]

thanks nate

why aren't you online?

[Nathanael]

I forgot to turn it on the messanger on today and I'm just about to go take a shower... posting from the faster computer.

I'll be on tommorow tho

[Gott ist kühl]

that sounds pretty cool. the momentum is nice, i like it. i dont really know what you could do for the ending, but it sounds cool!

[the flamingo]

Originally Posted by Gott ist kühl

that sounds pretty cool. the momentum is nice, i like it. i dont really know what you could do for the ending, but it sounds cool!

thanks for the feedback

but I dont think I'm anywhere near an ending...