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Old 04-21-2003, 04:22 AM   #16
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The band that I am in, (MICAH) this is our latest recording. Check it out I would love some constructive criticism.

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Old 05-05-2003, 06:00 PM   #17
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few very rough versions of some songs me and my friend recorded
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Old 05-26-2003, 09:47 PM   #18
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Here's a new recording I made.. 2 electric guitar parts and one bass part (the bass tone is awful, I know. it's a pathetic bass guitar though)
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Old 06-22-2003, 04:16 PM   #19
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I just put a bunch of songs up on soundclick.com.. if you could please listen and give honest criticizm, that'd make my day. Link is in my sig.. click the picture or the linked phrase.
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Old 06-24-2003, 06:45 PM   #20
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just a few recordings I've done on my own with sonar and my cheap sound card
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Old 06-24-2003, 06:50 PM   #21
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ok here's some live recording I've done.....it was just two sm 57s and 2 audio technica condenser mics I borrowed and put in the back of the sanctuary..ok maybe I'll only be able to do one song a post....this is amazing grace
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Old 06-24-2003, 06:52 PM   #22
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Old 06-24-2003, 09:28 PM   #23
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Old 06-25-2003, 10:59 PM   #24
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Here's something I threw together last night. Still needs alot of work, but I plan on turning it into a song if you guys think it's alright.
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Old 06-25-2003, 11:34 PM   #25
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You can click the link in my sig. if you want to hear my stuff.

I haven't done much recording lately because my computer sucks and I just got sick or dealing with it. I'll be getting a new laptop in about 2 months, and I'll do more stuff then. But in the mean time, i've been trying to write some stuff so I have something to record when I get my computer, so any feedback as to whether or not you like what i've done so far would be nice.
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Old 06-26-2003, 07:44 AM   #26
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Gravity - I really like the movement with the guitar and bass in the song, but it's missing a little spice. Try throwing in some hammer-ons and pull-offs to develop your technique and add something special to this song. There's a lot of room to work with it, and every time it plays, I just hear little musical add-ons that would sound really good to my ear. Good track, I really like it, honestly.

Thank You - While the lyrics are a bit cliche, most lyrics in praise songs are straightforward. I don't really have a problem with anything but this one line:
I bring you Grace
Keep in mind, it's the other way around. God gives US grace through faith in Jesus. We aren't out here to save God from anything . I like the lead guitar, it's very tasteful, but there's this one little part in the song where a dissonant note sounds.. it eventually sounds good, but just try to keep that out of there. Sweet effects, by the way.

Amazing - How'd you get that awesome synth sound? Anyways, the problem I have with this song is that, putting aside the fuzz I hear in the background and the bad recording quality (cause that's not your fault) is the drums. They just overpower this fragile song. I can't hear much from the music standpoint, but I like the vocal melody. There are a couple of points where the vocals and bass go off key for the worse, so tighten that up. On outro at around 3:18, tune your electric guitar . There's one note that sounds quite sharp.

Holy - The drums are paced well on this one, but the rudiments and embellishments seem a bit agressive in the first :30 of the song. My brother, RhthmicAndy (drummer) is sitting right here, saying they're a bit too fast . Plus, try to vary the embellishments. I like how the bass builds.. nice bass work, it really compliments this song. Not much more musically. I wish I could hear the harmonizing better. Whoever is signing has a nice voice.

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Loop1 - While I'm not a fan of synth and machined beats, the cascading music catches my attention. I think you should do something with this. I suggest adding some accompaniment guitar or some lead over it, but very tastefully.

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Old 07-20-2003, 04:16 PM   #27
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I have some new stuff at the site in my sig. Some of it isnt totaly done but it is all listenable. Let me know what you think.

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Old 07-27-2003, 06:58 PM   #28
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Here's a rough mix of something I recorded last week. It started out as a P&W song that I wanted to change the arrangement on. Than it turned into something totally different. I want to try and make this into a full song, but for now this is all I've got.
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Old 08-01-2003, 09:36 PM   #29
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Me and my bro record a good bit of music. To hear some of it click the link in my sig.
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Old 08-07-2003, 04:04 AM   #30
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Hey,

Come and listen to three of our songs on:

www.MP3.com.au/sajuris

I would love to hear you guys review three of the songs that my band SA JURIS has recorded at our home studio.

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