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Old 01-15-2003, 11:40 AM   #1
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Fickle (RC)

This is a very Five Iron Frenzy/Supertones sounding song. The setup is kind of odd, but you'll have to trust that it fits the music. The guitar is simple, playing chords on the off beats, and it's got a real kickin' bass line, and it's meant to really be cranked. I haven't written the horn yet, but it'll be there soon enough.


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Intro: (drum fill pickup [one or two measures], bass riff with guitar come in, once through the bass line, then add vox)

Verse:

One more time Jesus
Last time, I swear
From now on I'm yours
Take me back!

**still the verse, but the tune and rythym changes**

I don't need You, can't you trust me?
I can do this on my own
I won't screw up this time, I promise

Pre Chorus(yelled):

Why didn't you help me?
You let me (made me) through this pain

Chorus:

Oh God, love me, heal me, make me whole!
I love You, I need You... For now

Verse 2:

I can work it out
just this one more thing, i swear
After this it's yours
Take me back!

I need You, can't I trust You?
I can't do this on my own
I screwed it up again, I'm sorry

Pre Chorus:

Chorus:

Bridge - bass riff same as intro, guitar solo comes in after once through the riff. no vox.

Chorus:

The song stops abruptly right after the chorus ends

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