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Old 09-24-2002, 06:09 PM   #1
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Your Big Brother (RC)

Okay umm this song is kind of weird for me cuz its sort of real but not completely. I wrote it as if i had a little sister to look after once my father died (which he did).

Your Big Brother

He's gone and I know,
This isn't easy for you.
You two were close.
Loved each other a lot.

You're looking really down,
Thinking of things you shouldn't.
You can make it through.
I can help you if you let me.

I love you, little sister,
He's gone for me too,
Lets get through this
together we will get through this.

He was more of a father to you,
more than he was for me,
It's still hard for me but for you,
It's unbearable I know.

Call me up some time,
We will talk for a while.
I'll try to be,
Your brother not your father.

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Old 09-25-2002, 08:50 PM   #2
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thats awesome
I do have a big brother, so that was like"whoa" to me!!
Great way to play on emotins... I enjoyed reading it
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Old 09-25-2002, 09:09 PM   #3
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i'm glad to hear that it meant something to you i truely am.
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Old 09-25-2002, 11:34 PM   #4
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Very nice! I think it has the potential to be a very touching song. Rock on!
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