the freestyle thread

froggee501 · 05-10-2002, 05:16 PM

word, yo

Insane Drummer · 05-10-2002, 05:17 PM

ok then i'll throw at a new word... WORD =formation

Jeff · 05-10-2002, 07:48 PM

the crystal formations
cool around your eyes
at subzero temperatures, you
breathe a sigh
I breathe your icy sighs
and I cannot escape,
will not leave my
painful addiction
Feed me the sweet ice shavings that
line your heart
cool me down
I like it hot

Jeff · 05-10-2002, 08:00 PM

karma

tropicana · 05-11-2002, 07:07 PM

So sorry about not adding a new word before....

Jeff · 05-12-2002, 11:55 AM

come on someone

Jeff · 05-12-2002, 07:01 PM

aight then, new word Coma, or Sandstone, or Arteries

perhaps · 05-12-2002, 08:33 PM

i am freestylin
look at me free style
ya ya ya woo woooo
freestyle, like the nile
i am in denile

ok, this just isn't working

i tried

Jeff · 05-13-2002, 01:29 PM

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post something yall, or at least give a word!!

froggee501 · 05-13-2002, 01:35 PM

sorry, I've been so stressed out lately, I've got an oral exam in english tomorrow, and TWENTY possible questions for it, plus a children's book that I'm working on EVERYWHERE, ALL THE TIME, but I don't know if I'll get it done in time....

therefore, I'm not feeling very poetic of late.... I'll do something in a few days.... but a word for you....techniques.

Jeff · 05-14-2002, 01:58 PM

so smooth
you move, unmoved
unseen in your cloak of night
but I see your techniques
your
psyche manip
sneaks and the
dirt stained streaks that
cover their eyes
master of emotions do
you hold the neurons
on a string?
its scary, the effect
it even has on me
sometimes I am
moved to my feet in
rage against the clockwork
sometimes I wish I was you
and I see your techniques
unseen in the cloak of night
you move, unmoved
so smooth

Insane Drummer · 05-14-2002, 02:06 PM

sandstone
crumbles
lashed by wind
a great mountain
erodes to dust
falling breaking
falling still
beauty wasted
wonder stilled
falling broken
falling fast
the great high peak
of ages past
now lays waste
now lays flat
falling broken
falling fast

ok i have no idea what i jsut wrote i just randomly placed words and stuff..... lol....

WORD --- reality --- if we already used that then try
WORD --- wonder---

Jeff · 05-14-2002, 02:13 PM

casually
you brush reality back from your face
The colbolt orbs
pierce like bladed
rings and I am
swept away with your
chestnut locks
my heart is taken on
the voyage through
space on the molecular
scale
can you send me back
or come with? irreversible
light blindedness I
swear I never
saw the stars before
I swear I never saw
a mountain range ( sorry couldnt resist)
until you stole
these eyes today

Insane Drummer · 05-14-2002, 02:17 PM

new word?? or are we supposed to use some of oyur old words??

Jeff · 05-14-2002, 02:18 PM

thats why they are there. . .

Cake
Crayons
stars
girls
love
boston
injury
genious