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Unread 04-30-2002, 04:10 PM   #76
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Its not that it wasn't well written, it just didn't go with the rules of the game.

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Unread 04-30-2002, 07:33 PM   #77
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he might not of read the whole rules... but ah oh well.... man i can't get nothing from that word....
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Unread 04-30-2002, 07:45 PM   #78
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someone a long time ago said obbsession so:
Obsession the question is pressin on my chest and its pullin me down wut shloud i do where should i eat what should i wear who gives a care be yo self i bring this rhyme not to spray slime or grime but to stop the crime of of vanity its inhumanity to be a slave to society so be free and then you will see why im tellin u this not to dis but to praise the greatest who created you in His image so dont go tryin to improve on this God's the only one who gave his son to die on the cross for your sin yet again u dont reely care or do i dare say that u just a hypocrite so this is bust ya better trust the god above.
I dont know if that maes good sense but there ya go
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Unread 04-30-2002, 07:57 PM   #79
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i didnt read the rules

Epiphany thats kinda tricky to see wut the word means it be the day the wiseman cometh but now i see that its also a sudden image of an essence or its graspin the reality of divine beings through an action then theres the reaction of realization that youve been blind to this manifestation or wutever it be forever before im done wit this rhyme so i gess ill go dont be slow the words seem to flow without restriction it isnt fiction to me so ill be leaving

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Unread 05-01-2002, 01:35 AM   #80
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and you see, I pondered the implications of the title I picked too. Then I dismissed it. Silly me.
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Unread 05-01-2002, 01:43 PM   #81
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The fears of the public's maitre di (sp?)
roll down in sweat
of private cheeks, to public plates
the vile, voracious, villains feast
the secrets pour into
their antonym at
the delight of
public men that scavenge
like vultures for
the rotting flesh of
an honest man's
dying dreams
both lay equally still
drunk to the point of sleep
chaotic peace of those
who consume their sweaty fears,
and those who taste the private
tears
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Unread 05-01-2002, 08:06 PM   #82
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word- Tickle
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I SAID TICKLE DARNDIT !!
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Unread 05-02-2002, 07:37 PM   #84
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we don't like that word.....:kspin: :kspin: :kspin:
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TICKLE
by Emma Catherine Tucker

Have you ever tried to tickle a pickle?
A pickle can be rather fickle...
me, personally,
I'd rather be
fickle than tickle a pickle.

hey, I tried......

word: calculation
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oh that was just beuatiful!!!......
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The unknowing calculation
clever preponderance of knowledge carrots
that fill the blushing ground
or something in such
a similitude-
the miry mind of those
with knowledge for the sake
of complaining
or unknowing wisdom with a reflexive
motivation
Now, when does the cog
fall in place?
the motionless wheel spins
in your head
the calculations meaningless
not attatched to the
world.
The abstract algebra confines
your own experience
and it finds itself a man that saws the branch
he sits on
and falls from
calculate now
the velocity of the fall
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word: Clockwork
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CLOCKWORK
by Emma Catherine Tucker

standing lost in the shadows
of her mind, she stays
she stays
she taps her foot to the internal beat
but the people keep rushing around her
filling the subway with the sound of their feet
and their dreams and goals and pains
but as these people move on through
with the feelings and thoughts floating along
Life just rushes on past her
For she's just standing in the shadows
An unmoving object
In a world that just moves like clockwork.
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