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Unread 04-01-2003, 08:37 PM   #781
your tone's all wrong.
 
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Like being dragged
Lethargic and murmuring
Onto a somnolent UFO,
Immobilized and probed
While climbing
The stairway to Heaven.
Effortlessly
Connected
Direct line to the clairvoyant.
Drugged up,
Dumbed down.
The material reality
Of telepathy:
Hypnotized
And violated
Left to breathe
And dared to sleep
In this urban cocoon.
This is love.

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Unread 04-01-2003, 08:39 PM   #782
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word= "uncouth"
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Unread 04-03-2003, 04:08 AM   #783
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I'm not a pretty soul,
Dressed up in your frilly dress,
Hair curled, with precious manners.
Instead, I am uncouth,
Dragged in the mud,
Passed out in the cold.
I speak with an untamed tongue,
Restless and evil.

Must I change this?
Must I become this other person?

I am incomplete,
But I do not want your completeness
It is foreign to me,
Another world, another time,
Another place for me to lose my identity.

Will I remain myself?
Will I be unrecognizable?

Dress me up in your dresses if you must,
Curl my hair and teach me to speak properly,
If it's truly the only way to commune with you.



New word: doubt
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Unread 04-03-2003, 01:39 PM   #784
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Heat
Thrusts misery through her stringy veins
Climbs into her womb
Filters through her netted core
Plugs every cavity with evil notions
And inflates

The cells multiply and divide

Chill
Thrusts poverty through a solid shroud
Tames amniotic beasts
Fingers (gently) the atomic, beating heart
Punctures every doubtful levy
And subsides
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Unread 04-03-2003, 01:39 PM   #785
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Unread 04-03-2003, 06:02 PM   #786
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I'm not sure the better way
to make use of my trident
I could freshen the air and be cool
I could stab you through the heart

either way you'd be my queen
we'd rule the sea for a thousand years




just trying to break this little dry spell I've got going. I know its nothing special, but its writing. . . .


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Unread 04-03-2003, 07:09 PM   #787
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Saliva Bond

My initial denial
Catches in my throat
Bound up by my saliva
A primordial conscience, denying my primordial urge
So I have gone to find myself
Leaving me behind for the time being
Entering your eyes
As they catch my soul
And broadcast it to your mind

Will I find myself here?
Is it here that I will become one?

Now I must leave
I'm spit up in your smile
I reenter me, tainted beautifully by your saliva
Urged by this conscience
To spit on you
To spit on my hand and shake yours
To become one in saliva, body, and mind



Okay...that was wierd...
New word: regal
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Unread 04-03-2003, 10:09 PM   #788
Get with the fusion
 
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I can breathe,
And I can touch,
But I can't hear a sound,
Not a word that resounds
Or presence that instills
My blesse`d hearing will.
Inscibed upon my eye
Transient help and clear skies
That gives me legal bounds
For hearing all the sound.


word: social
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Unread 04-04-2003, 03:50 AM   #789
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the lights come up on happy land
and one hundred little people
come to rally around their stuff'ed purple king
I'd say he's the polar opposite
of a dinosaur

bearded midgets sing to the children watching
baked under lights camera and action
"We are the products
of our social interactions
social interactions
social interactions

We are the products
of our social interactions

and that is all we are!"


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Unread 04-05-2003, 01:23 AM   #790
Get with the fusion
 
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Quote:
Originally posted by skeeter_dan
New word: regal
whoops... I misread that and accidentally did a freestyle on the word "legal"... so, if you're wondering why my poem had nothing to do with "regal", this is why.
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Unread 04-05-2003, 11:30 PM   #791
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fine. stalemate
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Unread 04-06-2003, 12:07 PM   #792
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geee whiz someone freestyle. make a limerick if you have to
use ANY word, just make one.
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Unread 04-06-2003, 12:23 PM   #793
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In a land of two fists,
The democracy is king.
A system that fails,
But like its own creators,
Who devised from their own two fists
To make it like their own two fists.
With all their intelligible signs
They tell you where to go,
Follow the twofisted man,
He'll tell you where to go,
Follow the twofiste man,
We won't know.



Man, that sucks booty.

word: sucks
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Unread 04-06-2003, 12:45 PM   #794
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it's rival gravity that sucks you
it's a black hole in the corner of your mind
it's a slice in the space time continuum

if you let your attention wander
the magnetic interactions will rip you apart
little bits of you will float about in space

to blow a shingle off a space shuttle

set a straight course for the strongest force
and never look back


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Unread 04-08-2003, 04:52 PM   #795
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ok thats it I am closing the freestyle thread.
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