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Old 05-14-2002, 03:33 PM   #136
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Quote:
Originally posted by JeffboWilson
casually
you brush reality back from your face
The colbolt orbs
pierce like bladed
rings and I am
swept away with your
chestnut locks
my heart is taken on
the voyage through
space on the molecular
scale
can you send me back
or come with? irreversible
light blindedness I
swear I never
saw the stars before
I swear I never saw
a mountain range ( sorry couldnt resist)
until you stole
these eyes today
why the "sorry couldnt resist" part? or is that part of your poem?

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Old 05-14-2002, 03:59 PM   #137
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Crayons!
My turn! I've been observing and not posting- probably because I'm a terrible poet. But I'll give it a whack...

Span the supernatural spectrum
With shavings from your crayons
Shades that dye the world 3,000 miles deep
And leave your eyes groggy
As you kill the time by giving life to paper
Span the supernatural spectrum
With slivers of your pastels
And paint the universe the way you fancy

How's that? Horrible? Kinda cheesy, ain't it?!

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Old 05-14-2002, 04:03 PM   #138
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its not part of the poem. If you dont get it, i am not explaining it
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Old 05-14-2002, 04:21 PM   #139
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WHOOPS!
How about...

NEW WORD: GROGGY!

Did I do it right?
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Old 05-15-2002, 10:44 AM   #140
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Waking, yawning, stretching, Groggy
sunlight, morning, the grass is soggy

Outside the tent the sun twinkles on the wet grass
I shake the sleep from my crumpled self
and smile
The crisp air tickles my nostrils
and I rejoice to be alive!
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Old 05-15-2002, 08:52 PM   #141
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Yea!
3 cheers for GloryGirl! Nice to see some happy-slappy-uplifting poems around here!

By the way, new word?
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Old 05-16-2002, 08:27 AM   #142
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Old 05-16-2002, 01:21 PM   #143
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sometimes brown and somtiems green
growing slowly into being.
Some are round and some are not
they will fall into a......pot??
faling down from a tree
now you can watch me as I leaf

Heh heh this is my first spontanues (sp?) poem that I have written, so it is not that good.
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Old 05-16-2002, 11:27 PM   #144
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Old 05-17-2002, 09:55 AM   #145
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Oh yeah.. Potatoe!
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Old 05-17-2002, 01:42 PM   #146
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you mean potato

The potatos in your
plate are simple like
mirrors that reflect
your whole life
youve never left the
path your father chose
Are you happy in the coal mines?
was it worth never fighting back?
you never had to raise
your voice
but you raise your voice
now at your wife
the children become thorns
in your foot
Will hold them back
as well?
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Old 05-17-2002, 01:58 PM   #147
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Deepness!
How do you get something so deep from a starchy vegetable, Jeffbo?!!!
Scary!

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Old 05-17-2002, 02:04 PM   #148
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Deepness!
How do you get something so deep from a starchy vegetable, Jeffbo?!!!
Scary!

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Old 05-17-2002, 04:48 PM   #149
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Old 05-17-2002, 06:42 PM   #150
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Carrot
Here's my take on the carrot:

Carrots:
A matter of the infinite expanse of the intellect
Shimmering like a diamond
2 carats glistening orange
The unbreakable and the edible silhouettes
Become
A grocery store harvest
Of costly rhombus mineral
To dangle in the face of the mule
To throw with pearls among the swine
To confuse :kconf: the cosmos
To bury as treasure for all generations
Carrots:
A matter of the infinite expanse of the intellect

THAT'S IT!

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Swine
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