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Old 09-11-2011, 01:19 AM   #1
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(RC) What Can I Hide
I guess this is kind of an RC. I'm not going to change it no matter what you say. Thought I might as well upload it.

I wrote this song a long time ago, and never got around to recording it. I just felt like I had the time, and I was in the mood. Hope you enjoy it. It's available for download for free if you want it.

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Old 09-11-2011, 04:36 AM   #2
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Thats cool baby, I wish I had the ability to come up with new songs.
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Old 09-11-2011, 11:42 AM   #3
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Oh yeah. Lyrics.

What can I hide when I'm with You
For You know all of me
Take my heart and make it true
And let me be pleasing to You

I love Your ways
And I've only had one taste
The fullness of Your grace
You saved a wretched man like me
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Old 10-10-2011, 05:22 PM   #4
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Great song, the guitar was outstanding. Kind of Claptony. Great start to the lyrics.
Need to get it finished man. Be brave with the bridge.
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Old 02-10-2012, 04:56 AM   #5
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Great work. It makes me want to set on a beach, around a fire, with a hand drum...

The addition of a bridge would take this song to a new level but it's great as it is.
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Old 02-13-2012, 08:31 AM   #6
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I had what might be a neat idea for this song. You could evolve throughout the song from “the need to hide”, “what can I hide”, to “no reason to hide”. Your verse would be a great intro for the conclusion that there is no reason to hide from God as He is all knowing. You could have evolving verses for the other two choruses that are below. That is IF you believe in evolution.

I highlighted in red the words that I change…it’s just an idea. Do with it what you will.

Verse about struggles/weaknesses.

These are the things that I hide from You
But You know all of me
Take my heart and make it true
And let me be pleasing to You

Verse about God's omniscient-ness.

What can I hide when I'm with You
For You know all of me
Take my heart and make it true
And let me be pleasing to You

I love Your ways
And I've only had one taste
The fullness of Your grace
You saved a wretched man like me

There’s no reason to hide when I'm with You
For You know all of me
Take my heart and make it true
And let me be pleasing to You
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