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Old 12-12-2009, 03:49 PM   #1
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Wow.... I haven't been to this site in ages. I used to tab a lot of united, and switchfoot, and RK. Good times. Anyways. Just looking to see what people think of my music. I written a bunch of songs over the past few years. But last year I was dying to write a good christmas song. I tried a number of times but it always came out cheesy. So on Christmas day I had to housesit by myself. At 2am I was still up playing guitar. And in literally 20 minuets I wrote and recorded this song with one mic in the center of the room. It makes me think this holiday is more than just a celebration. That maybe there is power in the day we celebrate Our saviors birth... anyway thats a different forum I'm sure. Anyways enjoy!

And if you like it you can check out my website. The songs there are a little better recorded. Mike Lynam on MySpace Music - Free Streaming MP3s, Pictures & Music Downloads

Thanks and God Bless,
Mike
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Old 12-17-2009, 12:28 AM   #2
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Any band could record/perform that song, but it wouldn't seem right. It sounded good. I liked the acoustic sound. I feel I could give a better critique if there were lyrics for me to read over...anywhere I could find them?
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Old 12-17-2009, 07:31 PM   #3
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Thanks. Yea here are the lyrics


I fell its time for some honesty
in this empty house as silence rings
I hoped for change, I prayed for me
but this year has failed to give it to me

but this day i believe
you came alive to die to be with me
a baby gave me my place
and in your arms I'm there to day

Chorus
You made it all right
You made it all right when you were born
You make it alright
today

was this the moment that you chose Lord
That I was worth dying for
Did my mistakes nail this baby's hand
did he think of me as he was rocked to sleep?

Chorus

but this day i believe
you came alive to die to be with me

End Chorus
and I'm in your arms
I'm in your arms where I was born
I'm in your amrs
Today
to stay
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