[amczap]

I have some good verses I just dont know where to go from there, any ideas would be greatly appreciated, thanks!

The words pour out, the feelings scatter about. Dont know where to start, or where to break apart. Never gonna know what they'll stir about in you, but for me they'll always bring back the memories of shooting the game winning three, taking the first steps and finally feeling free, reaching out and try something new.

and then

Time passes by so fast, never gonna forget our past, only the times we shared together. The memories will last forever. The late night phone calls, the movies at the mall. It seems so short ago when our hands never seem to break apart.

[tmlfan123]

Can you try phrasing this a little better for us? Such as:

The words pour out
The feelings scatter about
Don't know where to start
Or where to break apart

... etc.

Just so we can see how you're intending this to be read.

[Small]

It may be helpful to ask yourself what you're really trying to say--what statement are the verses a part of? And then fill out the rest of that statement.