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Old 10-23-2009, 02:23 PM   #1
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Something along the lines of "Mind over Matter" or "Bent Reality"

"Walls, as I break them down they're closing in again
I can never reach what I'm longing for
It's so dark, My eyes are splitting
I'm seeing triple, 30 fingers and a light

30 walls, 30 floors, 30 ceilings
30 windows, So deceiving
Never the same, Always changing
I'll never understand this polyhedral prison

I scream at the top of my lungs, No one can hear me
Just a glowing light always watching
I hear a voice, Telling me to stop searching
Just learn to live, Learn to listen.

I reach out to the light, It bends my reality.
I can no longer see, My eyes are broken.
These walls can no longer contain me.
I'm no longer trapped in my minds prison"

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this is so awesome
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Old 11-10-2009, 01:04 PM   #2
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It's so dark, My eyes are splitting
I'm seeing triple, 30 fingers and a light

30 walls, 30 floors, 30 ceilings
30 windows, So deceiving
Never the same, Always changing
I'll never understand this polyhedral prison
These lines are very compelling, though they seem rather haphazardly / matter-of-factly written.

The 30, 30, 30, 30, 30 image is surprising and simultaneously very frightening.

The "Never the same" denies everything that came before!

It was always the same! 30 30 30 30 30!

Very very interesting.
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