I am currently taking French at school. Every now and then we'll listen to a song by some French group or someone. I really like the song "A Thousand Winters Melting" by The Myriad, and decided to translate it. Recording the song is no problem, but I was wondering if I could get some help proofreading it (making sure it made sense en français).
The original (English) version is here for reference:
http://drivebymedia.wordpress.com/...song-and-lyrics/
My translated version:
http://www.pastebin.com/f4d39a789
Thank you so much,
--Stephen (Étienne)