08-14-2009, 06:49 PM
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#1 | | Registered User | Cam's Graphics work It should be noted, that I am new to this. 
I made this wallpaper for myself as motivation for NaNoWriMo. It's meant to be simple and to the point.
I'll post more once I get them done. |
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08-15-2009, 12:09 AM
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#2 | | blessed beyond reason
Joined: Jun 2009 Location: Oregon Posts: 3,255
| It's nice. Very stark. I'd have eliminated the exclamation point, since it seems to break the mood. |
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08-15-2009, 04:36 PM
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#3 | | Registered User
Joined: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,691
| I think one change would be to align the text with the top or the bottom. Get the spacing between lines closer together. Change it up a bit...... rotate "your" 90 degrees to the left and squeeze it up next to "novel". I think since we read text and it contains information, which is left-brained, we forget that text can be beautiful.... it can be a design element. It can be right-brained. We forget that, and don't get creative enough with it. I think you have a good start because you aligned it to the right, which is already counter-intuitive and unique. Just get EVEN more crazy.
Text is fun, too, because you don't need a lot of money to play around with it. No stock photography to buy, no fancy software..... so have fun with it! |
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08-15-2009, 05:19 PM
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#4 | | Registered User | Okay, I'll work on that. I seem to have deleted the original .svg, so I'll start from scratch. |
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08-15-2009, 05:32 PM
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#5 | | Registered User |
Like so?
Last edited by Cam42; 08-15-2009 at 05:33 PM.
Reason: fixing IMG code
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08-15-2009, 07:09 PM
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#6 | | I'm on a horse. Super Moderator
Joined: Jun 2003 Location: Seattle, WA. Posts: 26,291
| Never stretch type. Just don't do it.
The leading (space between the lines) is very tight. makes for a lot of tension while reading. |
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08-15-2009, 07:40 PM
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#7 | | Registered User | so somewhere between the original and the second for the leading? |
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08-15-2009, 07:49 PM
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#8 | | I'm on a horse. Super Moderator
Joined: Jun 2003 Location: Seattle, WA. Posts: 26,291
| Well, it depends. Whatever you do, do it with confidence. If they're touching, make them touch. If they're separate, make them separate. This is a really simple design anyway. Not much to it. |
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08-15-2009, 09:47 PM
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#9 | | Registered User
Joined: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,691
| Reminds me of this:
And Jon is right...... you must have confidence in placement and design, no matter how you do it. Confidence will allow you to stretch the boundaries, which makes for interesting and notable design.
(Also, I didn't mean you had to follow directions exactly. I was just giving you some examples of pushing the limits with type.) |
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08-16-2009, 02:20 AM
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#10 | | blessed beyond reason
Joined: Jun 2009 Location: Oregon Posts: 3,255
| Quote:
Originally Posted by Rainer. Whatever you do, do it with confidence. | That's pretty good life advice. |
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08-16-2009, 02:51 PM
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#11 | | Registered User
Joined: Nov 2001 Location: Canada Posts: 345
| I think your message is changed. At first you wanted to be reminded to work on your novel. Now you are emphasizing that the novel belongs to you so it does not matter when you get to work on it. IMO, I do agree with Sarah about placement, but if the font remains the same, then striking words should show a little colour.
Get back on message with 'Quit Messing' and 'Go'. Those are your speaking points right there. Show some tear away on the word 'Go' - italic, tire marks etc.
Not any scurring fonts here to choose but GO write your novel Cam42.
__________________ Love is a more Excellent way. |
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10-21-2009, 10:57 PM
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#12 | | Registered User | Hey, I'm working on another wallpaper, should be really cool. I'm almost done with it. |
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10-22-2009, 08:51 AM
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#13 | | Registered User |
There it is!
Oh, and by the way, this, and the previous wallpaper I posted are licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-Share Alike 3.0 |
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10-24-2009, 05:41 PM
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#15 | | Registered User | Okay, I'm working on a version of the corkboard with a wooden frame around it.
Any resolutions that anyone wants me to do? |
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