shawns songs (RC)

Kentl · 03-27-2009, 02:33 PM

i write love songs

forgive some more"
verse one
you and your friends walked the town all day
you and you friends got carried away
Pre chorus
Press you lips to mine and say
(forget before)
and you say hey

chorus
forget before
walk out the door
come on and let your soul soar
that is what love is for to forgive some more
come on and forget before... forgive some more

verse 2 i have told a thousand lies
i have only began to realize
that what i say to you hurts you
(forgive some more)

pre chorus
press you lips up to mine and say

chorus

bridge
forgive some more
that is what love is for
to forgive some more

chours

ending
forgive some more
forget before

6strings21frets · 03-28-2009, 08:43 PM

I liked it.

fenderguy962 · 03-28-2009, 08:45 PM

i did too. u seem to be pretty good at that.

Kentl · 03-28-2009, 08:47 PM

thanks i write song evrey day i live since i was 4
so yeah i beter be good

Kentl · 03-28-2009, 08:55 PM

well here are some song

christ is not a lie'

some say the cross is a lie
some say Christ did not die
some say he was never alive!

pre chorus
but Christ did die he was alive Christ is not a lie!

chorus
Open your eyes just open you mind and you will find
out Christ is not a lie
wean will you realize Christ is not a lie?

verse 2
some say he did not come from above
some say he showed no love
some say there was no dove

pre chorus
but he did come from above
he did show his love
there was a dove

chorus

Open your eyes just open you mind and you will find
out Christ is not a lie
wean will you realize Christ is not a lie?

ending
open you eyes break threw the lies and see
Christ is not a lie open you mind and see
Christ is not a lie

6strings21frets · 03-30-2009, 06:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kentl

thanks i write song evrey day i live since i was 4
so yeah i beter be good

so how old are you?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kentl

christ is not a lie

That one's pretty good too.

Kentl · 03-30-2009, 10:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 6Strings21Frets

so how old are you?

.

14

6strings21frets · 03-31-2009, 11:51 PM

Wow. At that age 10 years of writing is pretty good. Are you in a band with any of your friends?

Kentl · 04-01-2009, 12:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 6Strings21Frets

Wow. At that age 10 years of writing is pretty good. Are you in a band with any of your friends?

yes i am wiht my best freind
and a some others
and mabey my older brother
if he gets his new bass

6strings21frets · 04-02-2009, 04:17 AM

nice. there's a forum where you can post about your band too. It's "CGR Members' Bands". Feel free to post about it there if you want to.

Kentl · 04-10-2009, 11:44 PM

my band plays this one and it is awsome
i might change it later

Verse 1
Before we were more then friends
before we shared each other sins
lets go back to wean
we were just friends

Chorus
Before the days of love
Before we thanked god above
before We were in love

Verse 2
Back wean I was just thirteen you were
Sitting near me
My heart pounded inside of me
Before then I knew you were a jewel
But before then I knew it could not be true
You and me just wont do
So before you say wait just put it up to god and fate you will see we were too late

Chours
before the days of love
Before we thanked god above
before we were in love

Ending
Before its to late
I don’t think we should date
So before you were my girl before I was yours lets go back before oh lord before its too late

this was my first song ever gutair and words