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View Poll Results: what do you think of my songs? (read them first)
0- not songs 0 0%
1 not good at all 0 0%
2 bad 0 0%
3 Beginner 1 33.33%
4 it is okay 0 0%
5 its nice 0 0%
6 cool 0 0%
7 awsome 2 66.67%
8 dude!!!! 0 0%
9 you rock!!!! 0 0%
10 best ever 0 0%
11 not saying 0 0%
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Old 01-07-2010, 11:04 PM   #46
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Take it form me
Verse 1
You fell in love with him in flash
You never even tried to look back
You did not believe he was a piece of trash
Yet He’s hurt you so mush you lost track
I can’t just sit back


Chorus
All this time his been lying
All this time you been denying
All this time you two been fighting
Why are you even trying?
Well take it form me
You better without him you will finally see
Just please promise me you’ll take it form me
And leave
Take it from me

Verse 2
You don’t tell your mom at all
You’re afraid of what you two did alone
And afraid what she would do if she saw
You can’t even look at her form down the hall
Dose her tears hurt you at all?
Dose it bother you how far you fall?
Just watch as her heart falls
And watch as I take her away form you all


Chorus
All this time his been lying
All this time you been denying
All this time you two been fighting
Why are you even trying?

Well take it form me
You better without him you will finally see
Just please promise me you’ll take it form me
And leave
Take it from me

Bridge
Shed tear for what you lost
And remember the painful cost of what you two did
And forget those memories from thing that are dead
And remember what I said

Chorus
All this time his been lying
All this time you been denying
All this time you two been fighting
Why are you still even trying?

Well take it form me
You better without him you will finally see
Just please promise me you’ll take it form me
And leave
Take it from me



Verse 3
Doesn’t seem like he cares anymore He got what he came for
Doesn’t answer your calls as his friend just stalls
He left you alone broke and alone
But come with me girl I’ll walk you home
And I promise I’ll never be gone for long
That’s why I made this song


Chorus
All this time his been lying
All this time you been denying
All this time you two been fighting
Why are you still even trying?
Well take it form me
You better without him you will finally see
Just please promise me you’ll take it form me
And leave
Take it from me


Ending
Take it form me
You going to wake up before the end
I’ll be holding your hand as a friend
I’ll be there when he is no more
I’ll be here forever more
Its all right girl I know you did not mean
To be just another teen girl after all


Chorus
All this time his been lying
All this time you been denying
All this time you two been fighting
Why are you still even trying?
Well take it form me
You better without him you will finally see
Just please promise me you’ll take it form me
And leave
Take it from me

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Old 01-13-2010, 08:05 AM   #47
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the 2nd song of 12
Blur
Verse 1
I’ve been thinking of everything going on
Eyes red with tears falling down
Did not know what you were thinking
Oh Girl
What I heard made me feel so unsure
How can that guy do that to you girl?
Where you the only one who did not know this before?
Oh girl

Chorus
In a blur He left her
For a better girl
One who’s better at this game
Who wants one thing
In a blur
He left her
For a better girl
Who does not care about the shame
Or anything


Verse 2
Someone needs to help her before she falls
Someone needs to save her from it all
Show her there are better guys out there
Oh girl
To show her that someone does care
And that what happened was rare
Any guy would want to always be there
Oh girl


Chorus
In a blur He left her
For a better girl
One who’s better at this game
Who wants only one thing
In a blur
He left her
For a better girl
Who does not care about the shame
Or anything

Bridge
It’s your choice of what to do
Stay here or find someone better for you
Someone u always knew love was true
I’m sure he’ll take care of you


Chorus
In a blur He left her
For a better girl
One who’s better at this game
Who wants only one thing
In a blur
He left her
For a better girl
Who does not care about the shame
Or anything
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Old 06-21-2010, 10:37 PM   #48
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I'm back!!!!!!!!
That's rigtht, kentl is back with a new song.

Simple things
Verse 1
I been thinking of how
We don’t hold hands no more
I been thinking of how
We don’t say I love you more
I’ve Benn thinking
It’s the simple days
It’s the simple ways
They mean more then anything

Chorus
I’ve been thinking of simple things
Like running though the heavy rain
I’ve been thinking of simple things
Like laughing in till we where in pain
I’ve been missing them
The couple who loved the simple things


Verse 2
Haven’t held your hand
And almost fainted
Haven’t been afraid
Of what I should have said
Haven’t done any of those things in ages
I know it’s the simple thingsI’m craving

Chorus
I’ve been thinking of simple things
Like running though the heavy rain
I’ve been thinking of simple things
Like laughing in till we where in pain
I’ve been missing them
The couple who loved the simple things

bridge
Life can change friends
In to bran new lovers
But in the end of it all
It’s the simplest thing of all
That we all need

Verse 3
I’ve been thinking of how
You haven’t been shy
To that one special guy
I’ve been thinking of
All those cute try’s
To win your heart
I’ve been thinking of those simple thoughts

Chorus
I’ve been thinking of simple things
Like running though the heavy rain
I’ve been thinking of simple things
Like laughing in till we where in pain
I’ve been missing them
The couple who loved the simple things


Ending
I’ve been wishing
That we be singing and laughing
Once again just like back then
I must confess
I loved it all
Maybe a simple rest
Form the complex things
Just a few kisses
And wishes
That’s all I need
The simple things
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Old 09-10-2010, 02:08 AM   #49
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one problem...typos...please fix them
yeah, that seems to be a problem that u have, typos. other than that its prety good (way better than anything i could do)
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