[JerRocks2day]

I can still see some typos, but it looks pretty good kid. Keep on writing.

[Kentl]

this is for my old freind mike
was alone


verse one
it was late that night when I picked up the phone
he said please come to my home
I am all alone
I said no
And now I wish I had known
Or had not left him alone

Pre chorus
With tears in his eyes he said goodbye by taking his life
He said in a note he was alone
What If I had come would this have been done?
all i know is he thought he was alone

Chorus

Did he not know he was not alone?
Did he see what he meant to me?
Did he know he was not alone?
Did he see what she did because of me?
Was it because of me that he thought he was alone?

Verse two
When the phone rang two hours after
I thought it was him and would hear laughter
but in stead I heard a sound of tears
and screams
of his mom the screams echoed of the rafters
And saying the same thing why why why
Why did he die why why why

Pre chorus
What could I do?
Why did I say no?
Why did I not go?
Why did I leave him alone?
Chorus
Did he not know he was not alone?
Did he see what he meant to me?
Did he know he was not alone?
Did he see what she did because of me?
Was it because of me that he thought he was alone?

Verse there
A looked down at the floor
I could not take it any more
I did not want to feel any more
I walked out the door
To find her I put my arms around her and said
I know he thought he was alone
But he had us and all along he should have known
She looked at me and screamed to me he is gone and nothing will be the same for long

Pre chorus
I know time goes on but I feel so wrong
Did he know all along?
Did he try to move along?
Did he know he would not be here long?


Chorus
Did he not know he was not alone?
Did he see what he meant to me?
Did he know he was not alone?
Did he see what she did because of me?
Was it because of me that he thought he was alone?


Ending

Try as I might I can’t escape that night
Try as I might I am losing this fight
I don’t think I will eve be right
But I know I am not alone and I know he is looking down below
And I know he now knows he was not alone

[RK_lover]

That's a really sad song...I think it could work well with music. Do you have any music for it?

[Kentl]

Originally Posted by RK_lover

That's a really sad song...I think it could work well with music. Do you have any music for it?

yeah but it is not that good
the beging is but after that i knida have a hard time so yeah

[6strings21frets]

I agree with Tim. It's a sad song, but I liked it. However:

What is also sad is the amount of typos I see. I know I might sound a little harsh, but seriously, people aren't going to be able to read what your trying to say when your posts are full of typos.

Just a tip for the future, just check your spelling before you post what you have to share next time. Besides, you'll make everyone happier and we'll all understand what you're saying.

[Kentl]

Originally Posted by Comma,

I agree with Tim. It's a sad song, but I liked it. However:

What is also sad is the amount of typos I see. I know I might sound a little harsh, but seriously, people aren't going to be able to read what your trying to say when your posts are full of typos.

Just a tip for the future, just check your spelling before you post what you have to share next time. Besides, you'll make everyone happier and we'll all understand what you're saying.

ummm i dont see them sorry can you *show* me?

[6strings21frets]

And in the post before.
Just because you're not putting typos in your songs, doesn't mean you can keep putting them in other posts. Consistent bad spelling is for CPF.

[Kentl]

i wrote this some when a lot of guys were saying how they wanted bad girl friends
made me sick so i decide to write this

Christian girl friend

Begin
My girl friend is a believer

My girl friend is better

Verse 1

She so fine sweet love of mine
Christen girl getting down
Every one watches her move around
Christin girl have fun and watch her
run

Pre chorus
No one relay knows how deep her faith goes but I know goes deeper then mine


Chorus she loves to praise god
She loves our bond
She acts blond
But is hardly ever wrong
You got it she’s a christen girl friend





Verse 2

Friday’s nights when parties are around you won’t find her around
Christian girl having fun with out all the other ones

Pre Chorus
no one relay knows how deep her faith goes but I know goes deeper then mine I said no one really knows just how far her faith goes but at lest to her very soul

Chorus

She loves to praise god
She loves our bond
She acts blond
But is hardly ever wrong
You got it she a christen girl friend


Bridge
Doesn’t take her long to show me what is wrong
Don’t have to break the rules to have the tine of our lives
The time of our life’s

My girl friends a believer
My girl friend. god I love her

Chorus

She loves to praise god
She loves our bond
She acts blond
But is hardly ever wrong
You got it she’s a christen girl friend


Ending
She’s a Christian girl friend
She’s my girl friend
She the greatest girl friend

[Kentl]

this one i dont like a much might change it

Prey to god

Verse 1
Go ahead and cry in my arms
As my eyes cry for you in this storm
I don’t know were this came from
But it is time I show you what I am coming form



Pre chorus
Hands are shaking
Slow breaths taking
And love is in the making


Chorus
When all goes wrong

And you feel like you can’t go on
Ill Prey to god that you’ll make it though
Even when you hope is gone I will prey to god you will be okay soon

Prey to god
Prey to god




Verse 2

So if you find a friend to stand by you then you will know it because of preys
And for the fact I care
What is there in you life and when everything else goes wrong I prey to god that you will find away to move along
From


Verse 2 continued
This cold
Sad feeling of woe
And even when you felling low

So
Chorus




Bridge
When every thing goes wrong I prey to god prey to god that it ends soon
Oh god
Oh god
Oh god



Chorus


Ending
And even when you hope is gone prey to god because I need you
And even when the storm is on keep you faith strong because I
Hate to have to you like this its true
Even when this is done I prey to god that you will make it though

[6strings21frets]

Hey I liked them. Just a tip with typing them out though:
try and keep the "stanzas" in short lines. when it keeps flowing like this:

What is there in you life and when everything else goes wrong I prey to god that you will find away to move along

the readers will lose any sense of rhythm they may find whilst reading.

[Kentl]

here is my latest one

the last mistake
Verse 1
She broke the glass
And swung and slashed
She did not want to think of her past
She cried it all happened so fast
She knew this would be her last mistake




pre
chorus
after words did she leave this word
or did she feel pain so much more?
Did she know that this would be it
That this was her last mistake her last mistake



chorus
I don’t know what you where thinking girl
I don’t know why you did not know that you where the one I adore
I don’t if your saw thought the pain or was it a blur
I don’t know if you knew that you meant more to me girl





Verse 2
Did I say that you had lost your way
Did I say things that made the pain go away?
Did I make you want to leave here?
Or did I make you fear


Chorus

I don’t know what you where thinking girl
I don’t know why you did not know that you where the one I adore
I don’t if your saw though the pain or was it a blur
I don’t know if you knew that you meant more to me girl



Bridge
The last mistake girl
Was like a blur



Chorus
I don’t know what you where thinking girl
I don’t know why you did not know that you where the one I adore
I don’t if your saw though the pain or was it a blur
I don’t know if you knew that you meant more to me girl

[Kentl]

Hey guys I put recorders of my guitar it should give you a better idea

[Kentl]

hey guys i am back with a lot more songs


this song is about my life since mike diei have thgout a lot




Life
Verse 1
Looking back
At this life
It all comes back
Like a sharp knife
Verse 2
In a flash I was young
And I had so much fun
All I did was run under the sun
My life had only begun
Verse 3
To you it was just another school
To me it was just so cool
To you it was always dumb
To me it had only begun
Verse 4
Then I went to 5th grade
and this entire thing changed
In time those memories will fade
But some things should have stayed

Chorus
Every year I grow even more
I change for better or worse
Who knows for sure? What am I heading for?
In life
Every time I choice a path
I change my life for ever more
Who knows for sure? Looking back will I laugh?
In life
Verse 5
Way Back in the sixth
Linda was the first girl I was with
She gave me her heart
And I gave her new thoughts

Verse 6

I broke the rules
And tried to be cool
I tried to hide
The Fear inside



Verse 7
Well Linda and I split
And I did not know what I missed
She dropped a dozen hints
But some how I did not know what they meant


Chorus
Every year I grow even more
I change for better or worse
Who knows for sure? What am I heading for?
In life
Every time I choice a path
I change my life for ever more
Who knows for sure? Looking back will I laugh?
In life

Bridge

I fear at this rate
It will be way too late
But thanks to fate
I was saved form my hate
I wish I was young
And just begun

if I just had one more chance at life
I would change a bunch of it this time





Chorus
Every year I grow even more
I change for better or worse
Who knows for sure? What am I heading for?
In life
Every time I choice a path
I change my life for ever more
Who knows for sure? Looking back will I laugh?
In life

[Kentl]

next one is one of a kind

well you can guess what this is about




One of a kind (1)


Verse one

From beneath the sky
I watch her walk by
I never dreamed
I ever find
This girl as mine
But here I am in her heart singing
hey hey im in love im in love


chorus

if anyone tried
to know this girl of mine
if they just gave her some time
will They find out she is one of kind


And I am here singing
hey girl hey girl hey girl im in love

verse 2
And in the end
I remember what I said
No regret ever
No one has ever been beteer

Singing hey I am in love hey hey I am in lover


Chours

if anyone tried
to know this girl of mine
if they just gave her some time
will They find out she is one of kind

if they just gave her some time
I am sure they will find that this girl is one of a kind…. one of a kind



Verse 3
As I watch her I realize
She’s my girl and I love her


Chorus

if anyone tried
to know this girl of mine
if they just gave her some time
will They find out she is one of kind

if they just gave her some time
I am sure they will find that this girl is one of a kind…. one of a kind

One of a kind
Sweat love of mine one of a kind
Girl of mine
One of a kind

[6strings21frets]

Life sounds so similar to Photograph - Nickelback that it's not funny. I'm sorry...