[tenwatt]

Here's "Feeding the Wolves" minus a bass part.

[tmlfan123]

Originally Posted by tenwatt

Here's "Feeding the Wolves" minus a bass part.

So I FINALLY got around to listening to this. I truly enjoyed it. Your voice fits the style perfectly, which I've found is something a lot of songwriters don't figure out very quickly. You aren't reinventing the wheel here obviously, but it is definitely a well-constructed song. I particularly like what you're trying to do with the bridge. The first line is my favourite vocally, the second is my favourite lyrically. I feel like the last line could have some more power vocally - not necessarily louder, maybe just a stronger melody line? As it is it feels unremarkable, but lyrically it should be remarkable. Other than that, I really have no critique to give, a solid song, one I'd listen to on any given day.

[tenwatt]

Thanx for a constructive review. It gives me a few things to consider. I'm going to have to re-record this track (due to a hard drive crash) so I'll see what I can do with the ending.