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Originally Posted by mYdEePeStDrEaM

"Burn it Down"

Originally Posted by mYdEePeStDrEaM

The walls that surround us
Aren't real.
This reality you made
Isn't real.
You built it with your thougts.
You built it with your actions.
I built mine with my heart,
And look where I'm standing.

The people that just can't hold on.
That's the type of person you are.
You're holding on the rail,
But soon you'll let go.
You'll just forget and then let go.

Honestly, nothing here jumps out at me. It's not bad, but it's not above-average.

Originally Posted by mYdEePeStDrEaM

Verse:
The glass shatters.
The people freeze.
Their lives are at stake.
Why did you do this?
Why did have to burn it down.
It's all crashing now.
Your life and everyone you love's.
You better beg for mercy.
Get on your knees and beg for mercy.

This is much better, although it could have some problems in translation to music.

Originally Posted by mYdEePeStDrEaM

Bridge:
If you had asked,
I would have died for you.
I would do anything for you.
But you didn't care.
Go on with your life.
Have fun wishing I was there.

I'm left wanting a little more here. Get angry!

Originally Posted by mYdEePeStDrEaM

Outro:
Your life still has meaning,
You just don't wanna find it.
Your heart still has love,
You just don't wanna believe it.
You still have me.
You just don't wanna admit it.

GOOD.

It's not a new way to write, but good is not necessarily new. If the whole song was this strong, I'd really like it.