[taykey]

I'm just going to post all the songs i post in this thread.






RC

scratch it out

a voice screams, inside of me
can i avoid any piece of my life
time to take a look around
and see what truth may still remain
and leave the pain to dry up still

suround the sound, then scratch it out
tell me where I'm going

the wall fell against my hopes and dreams,
leaving me empty once again.
is there an end to my cries?
what if something inside me dies?
where is my freedom? where is my life?
it's in your hands, it's in your hands, i trust your hands, i trust your hands

what else can i think about
other than pain and destruction
my life seems and feels so empty
where am I going now
will i ever get going, and how?

suround the sound, then scratch it out
tell me just what's missing

the wall fell against my hopes and dreams,
leaving me empty once again.
is there an end to my cries?
what if something inside me dies?
where is my freedom? where is my life?
it's in your hands, it's in your hands, i trust your hands, i trust your hands

to trust someone bigger than me
ends up harder than it seems
what else can i do, what else can I do?

to trust someone bigger than me
is so much harder than it seems
what else can I do, what else can i do?
what else can i do!!!!!

the wall fell against my hopes and dreams,
leaving me empty once again.
is there an end to my cries?
what if something inside me dies?
where is my freedom? where is my life?
it's in your hands, it's in your hands, i trust your hands, i trust your hands


how'd that end up so emo?*shrug*
I'll have to write a happy song now...

hmm... i like it better now.

[Gods*Armygirl]

Did you write that?
It's really good.

[Ordinary Sarah]

If these are songs.... perhaps I should move them to Songwriting?

[taykey]

Originally Posted by Gods*Armygirl

Did you write that?
It's really good.

thank you yeah, i wrote that.

Originally Posted by Ordinary Sarah

If these are songs.... perhaps I should move them to Songwriting?

ok i didn't know there was a songwriting forum...

and i'm not in a band, so they're not used for actual published songs, but i really do want to be in a band, and i would use them.

[taykey]

RC
we run

searching, seeking, not knowing where to go
Lord can you show me,
you know how I'm feeling?
I feel so alone.

so turn the page, everyday, write something new.
we can run so far
without getting anywhere
without them giving a care
without the wind blowing in our hair

so what do we do?
where do we turn to?

searching, seeking, not knowing where to go
Lord can you show me,
you know how I'm feeling?
I feel so alone.
though I know I'm not.

Lord, bring me up, lift my soul
I wanna know what it's like to fly
without having to die
we can run so far
without getting anywhere
without them giving a care
without the wind blowing in our hair

searching, seeking, not knowing where to go
Lord can you show me,
you know how I'm feeling?
I feel so alone.
though I know I'm not.

Lord, help me to see
what I was made to be
where I was meant to go
Oh, i wanna know
and I wanna know you
the way you intend me to
the way you intend me to

searching, seeking, not knowing where to go
Lord can you show me,
you know how I'm feeling?
I feel so alone.
though I know I'm not.

[RK_lover]

I really like them

[taykey]

thank you

whoa, how'd this thread get so many views?


RC
Don't let go

Don't let go,
Don't lose hope
there's so much of your life left, don't give up yet
you know you can't do this on your own
but don't let go

you feel so dry
put here to die
pushing your way to tomorrow
you'll find your way
just not today
but there will be an end to your sorrow

remember that you were wonderfully made

Don't let go,
Don't lose hope
there's so much of your life left, don't give up yet
you know you can't do this on your own
but don't let go

numb through the pain
loss with no gain
burnt out, you inner flame has died
cold and alone
a song missing tone
feeling so dead while you cried

remember that you were wonderfully made

Don't let go,
Don't lose hope
there's so much of your life left, don't give up yet
you know you can't do this on your own
but don't let go

there is an end to this pain
that consumes your every part
if you just open up, let Jesus in your heart

Don't let go,
Don't lose hope
there's so much of your life left, don't give up yet
you know you can't do this on your own
but don't let go

i like this one too.

[Cam42]

because people like songs...
especially these ones.

[taykey]

i feel really special


that was kinda cheap

[taykey]

don't know me

RC

you can't hear me,
you can't know how i feel inside
it burns
you might know what i'm going through
but it was different for you
you can't hear me cause you don't know me
only one knows my heart, and he's not you.

I walk near alone
cold and dry tone
i won't answer my phone
so don't try to call me
picking scabs won't let it heal
you pick the scab you miss a meal
this may seem graphic to you but it is very real

you can't hear me,
you can't know how i feel inside
it burns
you might know what i'm going through
but it was different for you
you can't hear me cause you don't know me
only one knows my heart, and he's not you.

I'm cold and afraid
my hair tucked into braids
i may seem ok, but inside i'm really not
picking scabs won't let it heal
you pick the scab you miss a meal
this may seem graphic to you but it is very real

you can't hear me,
you can't know how i feel inside
it burns
you might know what i'm going through
but it was different for you
you can't hear me cause you don't know me
only one knows my heart, and he's not you.

you can't hear me,
you can't know how i feel inside
it burns
you might know what i'm going through
but it was different for you
you can't hear me cause you don't know me
only one knows my heart, and he's not you.

you can't hear me,
you can't know how i feel inside
it burns
you might know what i'm going through
but it was different for you
you can't hear me cause you don't know me
only one knows my heart, and he's not you.


he's not you.

[taykey]

RC
lift me up

i walk alone nobody's home
where do i turn where do i go
i need some hope, God can i know?
that i won't freeze of numbness like snow

I have to face this knot inside my gut
or, i know, it'll grow tighter
so give me peace inside of my heart
for this world, i can be a lighter

can you show me now can you show me how
to make it through this storm somehow
i feel so dark, like a low flying cloud
i you love me so, could you show me now

I have to face this knot inside my gut
or it'll grow tighter
so give me peace inside of my heart
for this world i can be a lighter

it'll grow tighter, it'll grow tighter

help me now, could you help me now please
help me now, could you help me now please
I'm crying out, I'm crying out

God, please lift me up from the dust
please help me to grow in your trust
Lord, lift me up,
I'm thirsty, please fill my cup

I have to face this knot inside my gut
or it'll grow tighter
so give me peace inside of my heart
you know i can be a fighter

I have to face this knot inside my gut
or it'll grow tighter
so give me peace inside of my heart
for this world i can be a lighter

(lift me up)

better.

[Ican]

That last one is my favorite!

[taykey]

RC
start over

cold silver
plain and sharp
I press the blade to my arm
I cut through my flesh and
temporary pain eases my emotional stains

(heyhey)
the point rests
on my chest
i'm scared to move but I want to
plunge deeply
discretely
i hate myself i wanna be somebody else
or maybe just somewhere else

(heyhey)

this pain that burns, it runs so deep
i'm scared to move, i can't breath
but if i
try can i
start this life all over again?

no, i just
can't do this
you gave me hope once, now i
can't use it
don't know how
i'm lost can you please bring me back now?

this pain that burns, it runs so deep
i'm scared to move, i can't breath
but if i
try can i
start this life all over again?

i need your help please bring me back now
to your place of warm grace
i'm falling apart inside but my emotions i hide
from all of them, every single one
please bring me back now
help me get out, bring me back now

this pain that burns, it runs so deep
i'm scared to move, i can't breath
but if i
try can i
start this life all over again?

this pain that burns, it runs so deep
i'm scared to move, i can't breath
but if i
try can i
start this life all over again?



this one's my favorite so far

[taykey]

RC

I run into a wall
he breaks his knee and he falls
she sees and hears him call out
but she can't help
i cry alone at night
he's frozen there in fright
she's about to jump and take her life

and it all goes around
it comes back to where it was found
we all go through this kind of thing
we all have to face our broken wing
it keeps us glued to the ground
and we end up where we were found
and we cry but still make no sound
but to somewhere we are bound.

he's lonely over there
she's laughing with no care
she kills him once again inside
inside
he cuts his arm too deep
his blood begins to seep
through his clothes and onto the floor
he longs for more

and it all goes around
it comes back to where it was found
we all go through this kind of thing
we all have to face our broken wing
it keeps us glued to the ground
and we end up where we were found
and we cry but still make no sound
but to somewhere we are bound.

we all need help to turn to
we all need a safe place
where we can run and cry to
and be held in God's embrace

and it all goes around
it comes back to where it was found
we all go through this kind of thing
we all have to face our broken wing
it keeps us glued to the ground
and we end up where we were found
and we cry but still make no sound
but to somewhere we are bound.

where we were found


i don't like this one that much.




if anyone can help me find better tittles for my songs, that would be cool(please)

*waits for constructive critizism*

hmm... i like it more now...

[6strings21frets]

wow, these songs are great!

can you give me some tips on song writing? I suck at this type of thing.