[mokmok111]

Well hello Cgr. I am going to start a journal. This is going to talk about things happening in my life. Well I guess I will start with a little info about myself.

Age-16
Hight-5;10
Favorite color- blue
Hobbies- Drawing, reading, writing, playing games, and listening to music.
School- Home schooled.
Favorite bands- Lifehouse, Nickelback, Skillet, Boys Like Girls, and many others.
Favorite song(right now)- Thunder By Boys Like Girls.
Favorite series of Books- The Pendragon Series.

Okay I guess that is all for now.

[maeroxursox]

Hi Mokmok111! Whatcha up to? How's life?

[mokmok111]

Life is going good right now. I am writing a story I hope to put on cgr as soon as I get it finished.

[JerRocks2day]

Hello Mokmok11. Great you've started a journal.

[maeroxursox]

Originally Posted by mokmok111

Life is going good right now. I am writing a story I hope to put on cgr as soon as I get it finished.

What's your story about?

[mokmok111]

My story is about a boy named Mark. Is has these strange dreams and here weird voices. Then his dreams become real.

[maeroxursox]

Hmmm...that sounds kewl!! So how are you today? Are you doin' anything today?

[mokmok111]

I am doing good. Today I am going to hang around the house and play on the computer and listen to music. Also I am going to work on my story and draw my comic I am working on too.

[mokmok111]

Well right now I am making Mac N Cheese. Yum.

[mokmok111]

Okay here it is. This is chapter one of my story. I hope yall enjoy.


Whispers In The Dark


Ch.1 The Whisper.
“Mark.” This strange wind called out. “Mark.” It cried again.

Mark stood there in the middle of the woods. His dark brown hair and gray shirt fluttered in the breeze. Trees covered him on all sides.

“Mark.” The strange whisper in the wind called back out.

Mark took off running. Knocking down tree branches, Just to get out of the woods.

“Mark.” It sound like it was getting closer. Mark was running with all of his might. Then suddenly tripped on a tree branch, He fell and hit his knee. He held it in pain.

“Mark.” The voice sounded like it was right behind him. In the next moment he blacked out.

Mark set up straight in his bed. He was in a cold sweat. “What was that dream about?” He asked himself. Bu he was jarred awake by a throbbing pain in his knee. Mark grabbed his knee and a question popped in his head. “Was it just a dream?” Five minutes latter he was able to go back to sleep.

The next morning Mark stumbled out of bed got a shower and put on a fresh pair of blue jeans and a tan shirt. “Mom!” He called out making his way down the stairs. He walked into the kitchen. Lying on the brown wooden table was a note.
“Took your sister to a Birthday party, you may go to Tony’s house If you want as long as you are home by 5pm when I get home.” Love mom.

Mark put the note down a grabbed a pop tart.

After he was done eating it he grabbed his cell phone and dialed Tony’s number.

“Hello” The voice on the other end answered.

“Hey Tony, What’s up?” Mark asked.

“Nothing much, just watching TV.” Tony said.

“So do you mind if I come over?” Mark asked.

“Sure you can come over. Beside you owe me a rematch at Guitar Hero.” Tony Laughed.

“Ha.” Mark laughed. “I will be over in about 10 minutes.”

“Alright”

“Okay, bye.” Mark closed is phone. He walked into the kitchen and out the back door. He grabbed his bike and headed off.


Mark road down the road and made a right. After he made a right just a few feet latter he made a right. He passed by three houses and then turned into the driveway of this two storey white and brown brick house.

He parked his bike under one of the tall trees in the front yard. Mark knocked on the door. Knock Knock!!!!!!!

Tony answered the door. Tony is 5’9 with brown curly hair and glasses. He had on a plain red shirt and a pair of blue jeans.

Tony pushed up his glasses. “Come on in I have the game all ready set up.”

Mark walked on in. When you walk in to your left is a flight of stairs and over the stairs is a big glass slanderer. And straight away was the living room.

“Ready?” Tony asked. Mark nodded.

They played for a couple of hours and collapsed on the couch with exhaustion. “Do you want something to drink?” Tony asked.

“Yea, do you have a sprite?” Mark asked. Tony nodded and got up.

Mark closed his eyes. “Mark” It was the same voice as before. He shook his self awake. Tony was standing there with his arm out. “Here is your drink.”

“Thinks.” Tony’s phone stared to ring.

“Hello” He answered. “I totally forgot. I will be there in a few minutes.” Tony said hanging up the phone.

“What is it?” Mark questioned.

“I told my brother I would come and watch his football game today.” Tony responded.

Mark took out his phone to see the time. “That’s cool. I have got to get home anyways.”
He chugged his sprite and ran out the door.



He picked up his bike and got on. “Mark.” The wind whispered. He started to pedal. “Help us.” He heard when he made a right turn.

“We need you.” Were the final words he heard before he was inside his house. He looked at the all clock and it read 4:40 pm. He knew that his mom and sister would be home in about 20 minutes.

Mark plopped on the couch and turned on the tv. Bu before he knew it he drifted off to sleep.

Mark saw this little dark haired girl standing by this sparking blue water. She looked about 7 or 8. She had on a yellow dress and a sun hat. The little girl smiled at Mark and ran into the woods.

Mark ran after the girl. “Were did she go?” He wondered.

“He is coming.” Were the final words he heard before he was jerked awake by his sister Sally.

Sally was this blond hair girl with a few freckles on her cheeks, and when she smiled you saw she had a couple of teeth missing. She is 7 years old.

“The party was great!” She said happily.

Mark opened his eyes.

Latter that night Sally, Mark, and there mother Kelly was sitting at the dinner table. “Mom may I have some more mashed potatoes?” Sally asked. Kelly passed the bowl to Mark who gave it to his sister.

“So did you and Tony have fun today?” There mom asked.

“We sure did. We played Guitar Hero all day.” Mark said.

“Mark guess what?” Sally asked excitedly. “What.”

“My friend that just turned 7 is coming over tomorrow.” Sally said.

“Cool.” Mark said getting up and putting his plate in the sink.

After dinner Mark went upstairs to his room. He turned on his lamp that was on a small dresser. The dresser was brown with two drawers. Mark picked up a picture.

In the picture was Mark just three years ago, when he was 11. Next to Mark was a tall man about 6;1 with long jet black hair that fell to his shoulders. He had on hunting clothes and boots.

“Dad.” Mark sighed. He turned the light out and went to sleep.

Mark woke up with the sunlight shining on his ace from the curtains of his window. “AAA.” Mark yawed.

He got up got a shower and put on a blue shirt with a yellow lighting blot on it and a pair of pants and a tan ball cap. Mark gabbed his cell phone and saw that it had 1 new message. It was from Tony.
“Meet me at my house. Got something to show you.”

Mark ran out of his room and down the stairs. “Were are you going?” His mom called out. “I am on my way to Tony’s House.”, Was Marks answer.

“Well your sister wants you to meet her new friend.”

“Okay, well were is she?” Sally walked out of the kitchen. By her side was this girl. She had dark hair with a yellow dress and a sun hat.

“Hello.” She said and smiled.

Mark stared at the girl. He knew he had seen that girl before. “Huh, Hi My name is Mark. What is your name?”

“My name is Rebecca.” She said.

“Nice to meet you.” Mark said as he walked out the door.

[maeroxursox]

That's pretty good, and interesting

[mokmok111]

Originally Posted by maeroxursox

That's pretty good, and interesting

Thanks. I have a lot of it wrote down but still I have to type it. I will try to get the next chapter up by the end of the week or so. maybe sooner.

[maeroxursox]

Kewlness! So How was your day?

[mokmok111]

My day was good. Tonight I am making this hamburger salad. It is good.

[maeroxursox]

Kewl sounds yummy! So do you have any brothers or sisters?