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09-02-2007, 11:55 AM
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| Father, save him  Joined: Mar 2007 Posts: 1,885
 | I have no title yet :(  *This is a true story* She used to love and trust everyone Her heart was big just like the sun Then one sad day her mom was stressed and beat her child without a rest From that day on the girl was sore She could not trust anymore Her heart had hardened and darkness grew into the place that she once knew When she felt sad she'd lock her door and beat herself till she cried even more A year later she made a friend Thought all was well but it's not the end She learned to trust this friend she'd made Told him her secret but she was played Now she cries again he's lied to her She grew depressed Worse now, than ever Now her heart would scream She needed out Crying with pain All she did was shout Life seemed hopeless so she held her breath hopeing those pills would be her death Haunted by demonds she could never rest Her faith was weak She failed the test Then the day came she grabbed a gun Held it to her head No more did she run She said good-bye and fell to the ground To lay there forever withough a sound Then angels came and together they sighed "No longer will she ever have to cry"
__________________ "We're running away from what we cling to in our sleep. Through every night the dreams are failing what we keep."  i iz waching. always waching.  G*AG's poems -------> Journal <------- "How else but through a broken heart may Lord Christ enter in?" Come here Last edited by Gods*Armygirl; 09-04-2007 at 06:43 PM. |
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09-02-2007, 05:53 PM
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| Create in me a pure heart  Joined: Dec 2006 Location: Beautiful Mountains Posts: 248
| That's SO sad! Good writing though!
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09-02-2007, 08:52 PM
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| Father, save him Joined: Mar 2007 Posts: 1,885
| Thanks. I was crying while I wrote it.
__________________ "We're running away from what we cling to in our sleep. Through every night the dreams are failing what we keep." i iz waching. always waching. G*AG's poems -------> Journal <------- "How else but through a broken heart may Lord Christ enter in?" Come here |
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09-02-2007, 09:00 PM
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| Moderator Joined: May 2007 Location: Waiting Posts: 3,960
  |  Is this another true story?
__________________ This is what I brought you, this you can keep; this is what I brought, you may forget me. I promise to depart just promise one thing; kiss my eyes and lay me to sleep. |
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09-02-2007, 09:07 PM
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| Father, save him Joined: Mar 2007 Posts: 1,885
| Yes, very true.
__________________ "We're running away from what we cling to in our sleep. Through every night the dreams are failing what we keep." i iz waching. always waching. G*AG's poems -------> Journal <------- "How else but through a broken heart may Lord Christ enter in?" Come here |
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09-02-2007, 09:11 PM
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| Moderator Joined: May 2007 Location: Waiting Posts: 3,960
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09-03-2007, 03:08 AM
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| Dude.  Joined: Dec 2004 Location: Somewhere on I-5, Oregon Posts: 690
| You seem to have a talent for making me cry....darn you It is good though, I thoroughly enjoyed it...
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09-03-2007, 12:50 PM
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| Father, save him Joined: Mar 2007 Posts: 1,885
| Thanks. lol, they're supposed to be sad. I'm not very good at writing happy ones. 
__________________ "We're running away from what we cling to in our sleep. Through every night the dreams are failing what we keep." i iz waching. always waching. G*AG's poems -------> Journal <------- "How else but through a broken heart may Lord Christ enter in?" Come here |
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09-03-2007, 12:51 PM
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| Moderator Joined: May 2007 Location: Waiting Posts: 3,960
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09-03-2007, 01:04 PM
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| Father, save him Joined: Mar 2007 Posts: 1,885
| We'll see. 
__________________ "We're running away from what we cling to in our sleep. Through every night the dreams are failing what we keep." i iz waching. always waching. G*AG's poems -------> Journal <------- "How else but through a broken heart may Lord Christ enter in?" Come here |
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09-03-2007, 01:10 PM
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| Moderator Joined: May 2007 Location: Waiting Posts: 3,960
| They are really good, though.
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09-03-2007, 01:39 PM
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| Create in me a pure heart Joined: Dec 2006 Location: Beautiful Mountains Posts: 248
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Just an idea  I'll work on mine. 
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09-04-2007, 06:47 PM
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| Father, save him Joined: Mar 2007 Posts: 1,885
| Whenever I try, it always turns into something depressing. I think the reason is because that's how reality seems to work for me. I guess I can keep trying though. I'm working on a new peom now so I'll post it when I'm done.
__________________ "We're running away from what we cling to in our sleep. Through every night the dreams are failing what we keep." i iz waching. always waching. G*AG's poems -------> Journal <------- "How else but through a broken heart may Lord Christ enter in?" Come here |
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09-04-2007, 08:32 PM
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| Moderator Joined: May 2007 Location: Waiting Posts: 3,960
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09-04-2007, 10:14 PM
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| Create in me a pure heart Joined: Dec 2006 Location: Beautiful Mountains Posts: 248
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