[leenieweenie]

Wrote this today. Verse 3 still needs a lot of work, but the one up was the best I came up with so far. Input would be nice.



Verse 1
I wake up in the morning
It's just another day
Take a shower, brush my teeth
This feeling won't go away

Verse 2
In my room dressing
That meeting can't wait
In the driveway, start the car
The pain boils in my veins

Chorus
This empty longing
That leaves me searching
For you, for you

I'm cold and weary
Crying out here
For you, for you

Verse 3
Spend my day working
In an ordinary way
Come home after work
But my heart still aches

Repeat Chorus

Bridge
I won't make it through
Another ordinary day
So I'm crying out now
For you to stay

Repeat Chorus

Edit: I couldn't find a way to end it, so I came up with this outro.

Outro
I wake up in the morning
It's not another ordinary day
Take a shower, brush my teeth
And I begin to pray

[Tmurrin]

its catchy but i dont get what its tryin to say could you explain
maybe ill get it better

[leenieweenie]

It's about getting stuck in a daily routine, and becoming lonely. Then breaking the cycle by coming to God.