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Old 07-18-2007, 12:28 PM   #1
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[verse 1]

As I watch them growing
And I see the way they love me
I could never let them down

[verse 2]

Always watching for me
Always learning from me
And it makes me want to be like you

[pre-chorus]

And how could I
Ever deny

[chorus]

This love was meant to be
Everything that captures me
Forget the pain
But don't run away
From the things you'll need
To love

...

[bridge]

My love
For them
Is your love
For me
How much stronger could it be?

And their love
For me
Is my love
For you
I want to love you like they do
I need to love you like they do

[I plan on writing a third and maybe fourth verse soon.]

I wrote this song for the children I met on a recent mission trip. It is basically my testimony from the trip and I hope it makes sense. It talks about the love between me and a child and how it is the same or should be the same as the love between me and God. Thought I should throw that in for you to base your critique on. Thanks.

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Old 07-23-2007, 12:08 AM   #2
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This is an intersting writing style. Short and right to the point lyrics. I like this one.
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