[tinkerbell26]

sombody i know wrote this and they wanted me to ask
what people thought of it.
"Why is that in every life there is always an end?

Why is it that we lose faith with everything within?

I feel my self slipping into another Duldrom while I go Insane.

Is it that life is too different or is it all just the very same?

I dont need air where I have drifted to.

It's like the tingling feeling you get when your leg is asleep with out you.

The ground that I lay on is smooth and invites me in.

How can I denie such a gracious invitation.

Then my lords master piece, my body,
Was then eatened away and left shoddy.

This is my fate I feel when

Life rolls over and I becomes apart of sin."
-unknown author
on a scale from 1-10 10 being the best and 1 being the worst
or
just tell me your thoughts on this poem