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Old 06-12-2007, 09:42 PM   #1
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The train ride

The Train Ride
by Mike Vargas 05/26/07
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From the time we are born
The train of life is what we ride on
We can not change direction
On our way to the Judgement throne
Can you stop it's moving on?
When your life has run it's course
And your last breath fades away
Will you face the grave with remorse
Facing hellish fire's decay?
You can party hardy till droped on the floor
But are you promised the grace
To be able rise up again and grab for more?
Do not be a fool in life, friend
You did choose when you started this trip
Will you choose the when it ends?
Your journey has such a short term duration
Just like a vapor fading away
Suddenly we pull into final our destination
Now the fare has to be paid.
Can you pay the price for a life of sin?
There is a new living way
The life Jesus gave as a ransom for men
His blood is the fare in full paid

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Old 06-13-2007, 03:15 PM   #2
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I like this piece. Good job
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Old 06-14-2007, 04:44 PM   #3
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THE TRAIN RIDE {REVISED}

The Train Ride
by Mike Vargas 05/26/07
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From the time we are born
The train of life is what we ride on
We can not change direction
On our way to the Judgment throne
Can you stop it's moving on?
When your life has run it's course
And your last breath fades away
Will you face the grave with remorse
Facing hellish fire's decay?
You can party hardy till dropped on the floor
But are you promised the grace
To be able rise up again and grab for more?
Do not be a fool in life, friend
You did not choose when you started this trip
Will you choose when it ends?
Your journey has such a short term duration
Just like a vapor fading away
Suddenly we arrive our final destination
When the fare has to be paid.
Can you pay the price for a life of sin?
There is a new living way
The life Jesus gave as a ransom for men
His blood is the fare paid.
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Old 06-14-2007, 04:48 PM   #4
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thank you for the encouragement, and the nomination in this month's poetry contest. God has more planned for you than you can imagine God bless you.

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Old 06-14-2007, 04:55 PM   #5
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I like it! Good job on this!
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Old 06-19-2007, 07:48 PM   #6
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this is to God's glory. I can only write according to what he lays on my heart
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train ride {revision 2}

The Train Ride
by Mike Vargas 11:16 PM 6/19/07
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From the time we are born
The life train is what we ride on
We can not change direction
On our way to the Judgment throne
Can not stop it's moving on
When life has run it's course
the last breath fades away
man faces the only divine court
Facing holy mercy or decay
trek stops with a final station call
the time is now to make amends
none choose when to start this trip
we have no choice when it ends
This journey has a short term duration
Just like a flower fading away
Soon we come to our final destination
When the fare has to be paid.
We never could pay the wages of our sin
There is a new living way
The life Jesus gave as a ransom for men
His blood is the fare paid.
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Old 06-20-2007, 09:16 AM   #8
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thank you for the encouragement, and the nomination in this month's poetry contest. God has more planned for you than you can imagine God bless you.
OH why thank you so much
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