[Guitaress]

Love,
This is my finale say,
I don't want you
To go away
And leave me here
To fend for myself
I wish there was something else
I could say
To get you to stay
And make you realize
That I need you,
You're what makes
My life comeplete

Oh,
There you go,
Leaving me here
All alone,
Don't you hear
My heart's cry for you?
Don't you feel
My suffering
The pain of knowing
That you're gone?
And I know I can't
Get you back
No matter how hard I try,

My world's crashing down,
Crashing down on me,
Like a wave
In a raging sea
And I can't calm this painful storm
Inside of me,
See the blood stained walls
From the agony inside
Comeing out and strangling me,
Like a rope
Around my neck
Sufficateing me,
Can't I have
Just one more breath?
One more to say
I miss you

[Cruelty*free]

[Guitaress]

Originally Posted by Cruelty*free

Thank you very much C*F for yer clap offering!

[Cruelty*free]

You're absolutley welcome.

[Ordinary Sarah]

Final is spelled without an 'e'. Otherwise it's finale, said "fin-ahl-ee". Which means something completely different.


Anyway, I do like the last few lines. Nice building on a point. Keep that up.

[Guitaress]

Thank you Sarah.