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Old 05-03-2007, 09:04 PM   #1
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River Rat Huck
This is a Rap for my English Class, not quite done but it is a work in progress...

verse 1:
yo listen up to my sublime muse
it's not to languid
it's full of hues
it's not too ponderous
it's filled with luck
it's the historic rap of River Rat Huck

Chorus:
River Rat
River Rat
haughty and brazen
River Rat
River Rat
Frivolous and blithe

Verse 2:
My name's Huck Finn
and I have a clamity
I'm not contrite
Cuz it's no sin
They want to abolish slavery
for my friend Jim
so he will run to the river
with me Huck Finn

Chorus

Verse 3:
you have to be stealthy
nothing afoot
They think I speen my time in resolute dissipation
they air their complaints
an endless soliloquy
Don't think me phat
I'm a river rat

Verse 4:
That's my story
I confound the temperance
someone should write my story
it would be a sensation
Don't judge my life
with infernal divination
Don't need none of that
I'm a River Rat

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Old 05-04-2007, 12:14 PM   #2
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It's interesting...I just read that book. I think the structure could use a little work, and I can't really see any point in it, meaning, perhaps you could give us a little backround? It's not bad at all.
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The key to great tone is really found in the kind of hand soap that you use.
For years I used a typical off-the-shelf bar-type soap and I had no idea that, even though I rinsed properly and thoroughly after every cleansing, there was still a soap scum residue on my hands and fingers.
This negatively affected my tone in ways that I just can't describe.
Then, on a whim, a few years ago I wandered into a Bath and Body Works store at a local mall and picked up some of their gentle foaming anti-bacterial hand cleansers.
The difference in my guitar's sound is so wickedly improved that I no longer feel the need to buy a new amp or pedals or even strings...EVER!
So, it's my belief that tone is in the soap.
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Old 05-04-2007, 12:15 PM   #3
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it doesn't have to stick to the book, according to the directions...lol... I just have to use 23 vocab words and give context clues
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Old 05-04-2007, 03:01 PM   #4
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Yes, interesting.......
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Old 05-17-2007, 01:44 PM   #5
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I am performing it Tomorrow... I am so nervous.
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