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Old 03-23-2007, 10:48 AM   #1
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Jesus I Surrender: recording.
This is our first worship recording.. We are now working on our own music..



http://dwiracing.com/ShawnCupPages/Songs/Surrender.mp3

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Old 03-23-2007, 03:13 PM   #2
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Pretty Good
Very Good. The mixture of the guitar and worship is awesome.
Keep up the good work for God.
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Old 03-25-2007, 06:13 PM   #3
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Nice work.

The guitar intro is really good at setting mood for the song and is interesting. I love the tone. I am really impressed with the vocal work and I also like the lyrics, great for a worship song. The drumming is also nice and tight and holds everything together nicely.

Personally I dont like the violin or synthesized horn that your using. It either needs to be more interesting and dominant in parts or not at all. I would also use the guitars to create more of a climax in the chorus because at the moment even though the vocals are going for it theres not much there to back it up. Bass is fine too.

I like the song, but I would work with the guitar parts mainly throughout the body of the song to make it more interesting and compliment the vocals better.

Hope that helps.
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Old 03-27-2007, 08:34 AM   #4
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Here is anthor song we are working on: still needs alot of work but its a start. What you all think?

If you right click and select save as,, they will download... not sure why they are not opening up in a webpage..



http://dwiracing.com/ShawnCupPages/S...ting%20God.mp3


http://dwiracing.com/ShawnCupPages/Songs/Surrender.mp3
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