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Old 02-23-2007, 03:40 AM   #1
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Question So, I just wrote this...RC

I just wrote this with a person in mind... So. It's untitled, cause. I'm not creative enough to make one I guess.. But anyways. Tell me what'cha think.
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I’m here without you, but you’re not so far gone.
I see your face in ev’ry place, it hasn’t been that very long.

You left me for a while, and with love I let you go.
But now you’re here, living with fear. And I’ll stay, can we grow?

You have always meant the world to me,
Locked, in its box. My heart, you have the key.

I sit staring out the window, into the star scattered sky.
Is there anything I can do, anything for you? All I can do is try.

Life hurts as it goes on. You bottle up and hide in a shell.
When you walk, when you talk, I want to be the one you tell.

All your pain, all your sorrow, all your fears.
As you lie and you cry, I’ll catch those tears.

I want you to know. You’re the right mess for me.
There, in the air. Look, it’s our destiny.

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Old 02-23-2007, 05:30 AM   #2
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I just wrote this with a person in mind... So. It's untitled, cause. I'm not creative enough to make one I guess.. But anyways. Tell me what'cha think.
________________________________________________________________

I’m here without you, but you’re not so far gone.
I see your face in ev’ry place, it hasn’t been that very long.

You left me for a while, and with love I let you go.
But now you’re here, living with fear. And I’ll stay, can we grow?

You have always meant the world to me,
Locked, in its box. My heart, you have the key.

I sit staring out the window, into the star scattered sky.
Is there anything I can do, anything for you? All I can do is try.

Life hurts as it goes on. You bottle up and hide in a shell.
When you walk, when you talk, I want to be the one you tell.

All your pain, all your sorrow, all your fears.
As you lie and you cry, I’ll catch those tears.

I want you to know. You’re the right mess for me.
There, in the air. Look, it’s our destiny.
I personally think this is your best yet that I have seen. Good job. As far as the title, you can just go with that person's name. It works. Keep it up!
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