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Old 01-02-2007, 09:31 AM   #1
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I've got writers block
My mind stumbles upon what I think that I don’t know
My eyes weary
I want the words to flow
Oh, so so filled with fury
I've got writers block!

I pace the floor
Wondering what I will write
This feeling I can’t ignore
Maybe I can look up for insight
Oh, so so filled with fury
I've got writers block

My face is sweating
My hands pounding
The blanks words on the page are unsettling…..
Oh, so so filled with fury
I've got writers block!

I finally come to a conclusion
I know how to get rid of this confusion
I’ll just sit and wait
Until things come to me
Hopefully when it gets late….
My words will be free.

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Old 01-02-2007, 12:06 PM   #2
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well, seeing as its a poem and having trouble thinking of what to write in a poem, its an interesting piece. Irony i think.
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Old 01-02-2007, 03:15 PM   #3
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I think, in most of the places you used just "I", you should've used "I've". Especially when you say "I got writers block." That's incorrect... should be "I've got writers block."
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