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Old 12-26-2006, 01:49 PM   #1
Oh, so chickens DON'T fly
 
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We come before you oh Lord
Prepare our hearts to praise
With a song we life our voice
Give us hearts to praise

And we'll fall to our knees with hands held high
With love and praise we give our lives

You gave your love
You gave your life
You sent your son
And as we close our eyes (our eyes)

We'll fall to our knees with hands held high
With love and praise we give our lives


This will more than likely end up as becoming a song as soon as my friend gets home...maybe one we can use for youth worship. But for right now, I want it critiqued just as a poem or such...and I would like to know what it really means to you. I know what it means to me, but I'd like to know what I says to your heart if you don't mind sharing. Thanks!!!

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Old 12-27-2006, 12:06 AM   #2
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Looks really good. I don't see anything I would change. It's very solid.


Let me know if you end up wanting me to move this songwriting, k Adam?
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Old 12-27-2006, 08:23 AM   #3
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k k ... thanks sarah!!
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Old 12-27-2006, 10:30 AM   #4
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I really like this. This is JAMMIN" (it flowed nicely)
Job well done.
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Old 01-01-2007, 08:53 PM   #5
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hmmm im thinking about changing the bridge parts to this:

Here I stand with open Hands
As I give my life to you
My heart is before you now
And as I close my eyes....


yey or ney
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