[Role Modlin]

Originally Posted by Becky

eh.. doesn't really work.. i guess pills becoming a friend would work.. except it would totally change the meaning... I was going for the idea of suicide, but that would indicate a drug problem instead.. i could go with that though if you think it is better,

is the concept of a girl being killed better then raped? I don't know, father's raping their daughters, wife beating, and children starving are all things that often happen.. fathers killing their daughters isn't as common.. perhaps that's better? but logically it doesn't fit so much with the other two, it seams out of place.. Do you really think the concept is better??

let me know what you guys think?

can't use the church sits on it's hands.

They were just suggestions.

I would guess that the number of fathers who kill their children is greater than that of those who sexually molest them...that's why I suggested that line.

If suicide is on the person's mind...the pills could be considered a friend. A friend that will make the pain go away.

I think the image of the church sitting on its hands and doing nothing is pretty condemning.

Like I said...it's your song...use what you feel is right. I was only making suggestions.

[Becky]

I'm sorry Lee, I don't want to just nock your suggestions or anything!!! they were good suggestions.. just something didn't really fit with them.. I tend to like to explain out why i don't like things, it helps me think better.. but i wont do that if you would rather me just respond with a take it or leave it response.

[Role Modlin]

Originally Posted by Becky

I'm sorry Lee, I don't want to just nock your suggestions or anything!!! they were good suggestions.. just something didn't really fit with them.. I tend to like to explain out why i don't like things, it helps me think better.. but i wont do that if you would rather me just respond with a take it or leave it response.

I was just offering suggestions for places where I thought it was weak. All of this is subjective. What works for some doesn't work for others.